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It is to difficult for me, writing an article in English.
There are such lovely women (I would rather call them sisters) to help me that they go out of their way to correct my homework and a man is also helping me (I would rather call him brother), I am very grateful.Restarting to learn English is even more difficult, I will insist.
By the way, the above content is with the help of dictionary while I am writing. But even if it is difficult, I will stick to it.
Thanks again to those people helping me.
Good night.
Hello yinghuakaile,
I am glad that you are working hard, practice a little every day and you will get better. It may be a good idea to learn some grammar as well as vocabulary to help you with your speaking and writing. English is completely different from Mandarin!
In the first sentence you use 'so lovely women'. We use 'so' + adjective and 'such' + adjective + noun.
Best wishes
Bob
Hi,
I will try to help you as best I can. In your first paragraph, it is unclear to me whether you are referring to one or more women. "There are....women" is plural, so it means more than one woman, while "I would rather call her..." is singular and means you are talking about a particular woman. I will assume you are talking about more than one woman and a particular man. In that case I would suggest the following corrections:
Writing an article in English is too difficult for me.
There are some lovely women (I'd rather call them sisters) who go out of their way to correct my homework. There is also a man helping me (who I'd rather call brother). I am very grateful to them.
I find relearning English to be even more difficult (than starting from the beginning). By the way, the above content was written with the help of a dictionary - but even though it is difficult, I will stick to it. Thanks again to those people who are helping me. Good night.
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