why are there so many street dogs in my city?
Some people are so irresponsiable because they usually pick the dog from some animal donation fair when they are still puppies. They look wonderful like children. Some people buy them for their children as if they were toys, but as time goes by and the dogs grow up, it becomes expensive to take care of them, then people took them far away from their houses to abandon them. My city doesn't have public policy for street dogs and I feel sad for this because they are like humans being. They feel cold, sadness, pain and sometimes they also become depressive. I like all kinds of animals and I respect each one but dogs are specials for me. They are loyal, attentive and defenders to their owner.
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Why are there so many stray dogs in my city?
Some people are so irresponsible because they usually pick a dog from some animal donation fair when they are still puppies. They look wonderful like children. Some people buy them for their children as if they were toys, but as time goes by, the dogs grow up and it becomes expensive to take care of them. Then people take them far away from their houses to abandon them. My city doesn't have any public policy for street dogs and I feel sad about this because they are like humans being. They feel cold, sadness, pain and sometimes they also become depressed. I like all kinds of animals and I respect each one but dogs are special for me. They are loyal, attentive and protect their owners.Hi Jonas,
Thank you for sharing this post. You are a nice guy and I used to think that some animals such as dogs may even have more humanistic characteristics than the people who abandon or abuse them. I still think so.
Cheers,
Lance
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why are there so many street dogs in my city?
Some people are so irresponsible because they usually pick the dog from some animal donation fair when they are still puppies.They look wonderful, like children. Some people buy them for their children as if they were toys, but as time goes by and the dogs grow up, it becomes expensive to take care of them, then people took take them far away from their houses to abandon them.
My city doesn't have a public policy for street dogs and I feel sad for this because they are like humans being.
They feel cold, sadness, pain and sometimes they also become depressive depressed.
I like all kinds of animals and I respect each one but dogs are special to for me. They are loyal, attentive and defenders to of their owner.
Well written text but some of your sentences are too long. Try breaking long sentences into shorter ones.
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