First job
After I graduated from college, I joined to the military to finish the compulsory military service. After I left the military, I try to find my first job. It is very difficult to find a ideal job because I don't have any experience about working in industry. I try to write my good characteristics on the resume and I sent it to many companies. Fortunately, Some companis didn't mind that I don't have any experience. They just focused on my active attitude. I finally have the job and started to work.
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First job
After I graduated from college, I joined to the military to finish the compulsory military service. After I left the military, I tried to find my first job. It was very difficult to find an ideal job because I don't have any experience about working in industry. I tried to write about my good characteristics / write about my strengths on the my resume and I sent it to many companies. Fortunately, some companies didn't mind that I don't have any experience / overlooked my inexperience in industry. They just focused on my active positive work attitude. I was finally given a the job and started to work.Hi Marvin,
A good piece of writing!
Cheers,
Lance
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