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I'm learning how to write e-mails in English. Could you check what I wrote, please? Dear Jonn and Mary, Thank you for you letter. Sorry that I didn't answered earlier. A week ago I went in a new restaraunt near my house. It was a bad idea.. I got food poisoning! I was feeling really terrible, so I spent a few days at home, lying in bed. Now everything is fine, I'm feeling much better. I'm so glad that you coming, I'm looking forward to it. When will you be coming? I just can't wait. We have so much to visit and so much to do. I think, first of all, we should go to a Saint-Peter Church. It's an amazing place, there are a lot of souvenir shops nearby and a big lovely park. We defenetly should visit a Grand Beach, you would love it: clean and warm water, white sand and a fantactic band which plays every evening. I suppose it would more fun and convinient if you stay at my place, what do you think? Write me again, please. See you soon, Love, Natalie

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I'm learning how to write e-mails in English. Could you check what I wrote, please?

Dear John and Mary,
Thank you for your letter. Sorry that I didn't answered earlier. A week ago I went in to a new restaurant near my house. It was a bad idea... I got food poisoning! I was feeling really terrible, so I spent a few days at home, lying in bed. Now everything is fine and I'm feeling much better.
I'm so glad that you are coming. I'm looking forward to it. When will you be coming? I just can't wait. We have so much many places to visit and so much to do. I think, first of all, we should go to a Saint Peter's Church. It's an amazing place. There are a lot of souvenir shops nearby and a lovely big park nearby. We should definitely visit Grand Beach. You would love it: clean and warm water, white sand, and a fantastic band which plays every evening.
I suppose it would more fun and convenient if you stay at my place. What do you think? Write me again, please.
See you soon,
Love,
Natalie


Nice job, Natalie! 

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I'm learning how to write e-mails in English. Could you check what I wrote, please?

Dear John and Mary,
Thank you for your letter. Sorry that I didn't answer earlier. A week ago I went to a new restaraunt near my house. It was a bad idea.. I got food poisoning! I was feeling really terrible, so I spent a few days at home, lying in bed. Now everything is fine, I'm feeling much better.

I'm so glad that you are coming, I'm looking forward to it. When will you be coming? I just can't wait. We have so much to visit and so much to do. I think, first of all, we should go to Saint Peter's Church. It's an amazing place, there are a lot of souvenir shops nearby and a lovely big  park. We definitely should visit Grand Beach, you would love it: clean and warm water, white sand and a fantastic band which plays every evening. 

I suppose it would more fun and convenient if you stayed at my place, what do you think? Write me again, please.
See you soon,
Love,
Natalie

Hello Natalie,

REally nice email with just a few corrections, 'go' is normally followed by 'to', and take care with adjective order. Opinion comes before size!

Best wishes


Bob

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I'm learning how to write e-mails in English. Could you check what I wrote, please?

Dear John and Mary,
thank you for you letter. Sorry that I didn't answer earlier. A week ago I went to a new restaraunt near my house. It was a bad idea.. I got food poisoning! I was feeling really terrible, so I spent a few days at home, lying in bed. Now everything is fine and I'm feeling much better.
I'm so glad that you sre coming. I'm looking forward to it. When will you be coming? I just can't wait. We have so much to visit and so much to do. I think, first of all, we should go to the Saint Peter's Church. It's an amazing place, there are a lot of souvenir shops nearby and a big lovely park. We definitely should visit the Grand Beach, you would love it: clean and warm water, white sand and a fantastic band which plays every evening.
I suppose it would more fun and convenient if you stay at my place, what do you think? Write me again, please.
See you soon,
Love,
Natalie

Very well written!

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