Please correct my grammar
Today was parent-teacher conference at my son's jr. high school. My son has Autism so, he always fell stress for a lot of things.
In fact, He doesn't go to school because he can't understand study. But he is trying to go to school everyday. Hanging out with his friends and hearing to teachers story and play sports in school . everything is good experience for him. I am so happy.
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Please correct my grammar
Today was the parent-teacher conference at my son's junior high school. My son has Autism so he always feels stressed about a lot of things.In fact, he doesn't go to school because he can't understand how to study. But he is trying to go to school everyday. Hanging out with his friends, listening to the teachers and playing sports in school . Everything is a good experience for him. I am so happy.
Thanks
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Good job over all! Just be careful with some verbs and word choices :)
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Please correct my grammar
Today was the parent-teacher conference at my son's jr. high school. My son has Autism so he always feels stressed about a lot of (many) things, in fact , he doesn't go to school (often) because he can't understand how to study, but he is trying to go to school everyday. (contradiction he doesn't go to school, he's trying to go to school, needs to be expressed differently) He likes hanging out with his friends and listening to the teachers' stories and playing sports. everything is a good experience for him. I am so happy.Thanks
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Please correct my grammar
Today was a parent-teacher conference at my son's jr. high school. My son has Autism so, he always feels stress for a lot of things.In fact, he doesn't go to school because he can't understand studying. But he is trying to go to school everyday. Hanging out with his friends and hearing listening to teachers stories and playing sports in school . everything is a good experience for him. I am so happy.
Thanks
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@Daniel Thank you very much ♪
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This is your biggest mistake:
"In fact, He doesn't go to school because he can't understand study."
It should be, "In fact, he doesn't go to school because he can't understand his studies."
Study isn't something one understands, it's something one does. It's a verb.
His studies, are the topics he is studying, and can be used as a noun, here.
Also change to "hearing teachers' stories";
and "is a good experience for him."
Other than that, word choice and grammar was very good.
Also, I missed some other mistakes that other people commented on.
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