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My name is Ismael, i am mexican. For me understand the new lenguage is a more important. My english is bad , but i want learn because is amanzing lenguage. Thanks for read my commentary, God bless you.
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Hello,
My name is Ismael, and I am (1) Mexican. For me Being able to understand a new language is a more very important to me. My English proficiency is poor , but I want to learn because is this amazing language. Thanks for reading my (2)introduction commentary. God bless you.Hi Ismael,
I can sense the passion you have for learning. Way to go and you will improve as long as you keep practising.
Just a few suggestions for you:
(1) You are describing your nationality which is important. It's a proper noun and we capitalise the "M".
(2) A "commentary" is a spoken account of an event, and sometimes a commentary is given as the event is unfolding. You are sharing about yourself, which is an introduction.
Hope this helps.
Cheers,
Lance
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Hello
My name is Ismael, I am Mexican. For me understanding a new language is extremely important. My English is bad, but I want learn it because it is an amazing language. Thanks for reading my commentary, God bless you.0
Hello
My name is Ismael, iI am mMexican. For me, understanding thea new lenguage is a moremost important. My Eenglish is bad , but Ii want to learn because it is an amanzing laenguage. Thanks for reading my commentary, God bless you.Want to progress faster?
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