[ My trip plans in Hong Kong 29] Would you mind correcting my sentences? If you were me, how would you go about describing this. I'll be visiting Hong Kong for five days four nights on this weekends.

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[ My trip plans in Hong Kong 29] Would you mind correcting my sentences? If you were me, how would you go about describing this. I'll be visiting Hong Kong for five days four nights on this weekends. I'll leave at Kansai international airport on 9PM and arriving at Hong Kong airport on 12PM on Friday. It takes for about four hours. The time difference between Japan and Hong Kong is only a hour. I'll share with you a my trip plan. I'm going to stay the Hostel in Mongkok which is surrounded by entertainments and shoppings. There are a lot of restaurants and street food stands as well. [First day] I plan to take a bus from the airport to Mongkok bus stop arriving at 1AM .I'll be just taking a rest in the Hostel for tomorrow furthers enjoyments.

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[ My trip plans in Hong Kong 29]

Would you mind correcting my sentences? If you were me, how would you go about describing this.

I'll be visiting Hong Kong for five days and four nights on this weekend. I'll depart from leave at (1) Kansai International Airport at 9 p.m and arrive at Hong Kong airport at 12 p.m on Friday. It takes for about four hours. The time difference between Japan and Hong Kong is only an hour.

I'll share with you my (2) itinerary. a my trip plan.
I'm going to stay in a hostel in Mongkok which is surrounded by entertainment and shopping malls. There are a lot of restaurants and mobile food stalls as well.

[First day]
I plan to take a bus from the airport to Mongkok bus stop, arriving at 1 p.m. I'll just be taking a rest in the hostel for tomorrow before I start exploring the city for enjoyment furthers enjoyments.

Hi Hiro,

I went to Hong Kong last November with some students last year. Mongkok is definitely full of entertainment and dining options.

Just a few suggestions:

(1) Kansai is the name of an important airport in Japan. We capitalise the first letters.

(2) When you have a plan for your tour, you call that plan an "Itinerary".

Enjoy yourself!

Lance

[ My trip plans in Hong Kong 29]

Would you mind correcting my sentences? If you were me, how would you go about describing this.

I'll be visiting Hong Kong for five days and four nights on this weekends (only need to say five days, it sounds a little unnatural to say how many nights as well) . I'll leave at Kansai international airport onat 9PM and arriving arrive at Hong Kong airport on at 12PM on Friday. It takes for about four hours (not incorrect, but you could also say 'It will take..." )The time difference between Japan and Hong Kong is only a hour.

I'll share with you a my trip plan.
I'm going to stay at the Hostel in Mongkok which is surrounded by entertainments (we don't really say this in English, do you mean 'surrounded by things to do'?) and shoppings (shopping is singular). There are a lot of restaurants and street food stands as well.

[First day]
I plan to take a bus from the airport to Mongkok bus stop, arriving at 1AM. I'll be just taking a rest in the Hostel for tomorrow furthers enjoyments. (sounds a little odd in English, you could say "I'll just be resting at the Hostel tomorrow so that I am ready to enjoy Hong Kong the following day)

[ My trip plans in Hong Kong 29]

Would you mind correcting my sentences? If you were me, how would you go about describing this?

I'll be visiting Hong Kong for five days and four nights on this weekends. I'll leave at Kansai international airport on 9PM and arriving at Hong Kong airport on 12PM on Friday. It takes for about four hours. The time difference between Japan and Hong Kong is only a hour.

I'll share with you a my trip plan.
I'm going to stay the a hostel in Mongkok, which is surrounded by entertainments and shoppings. There are a lot of restaurants and street food stands as well.

[First day]
I plan to take a bus from the airport to Mongkok bus stop arriving at 1AM. I'll be just taking a rest at the hostel for before tomorrow's furthers enjoyments.

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It sounds like a fun trip!

Be careful posting your exact plan... there might be some creepy people online, you never know who's going to see your post :/

[ My trip plans in Hong Kong 29]

Would you mind correcting my sentences? If you were me, how would you go about describing this.

I'll be visiting Hong Kong for five days and four nights this weekends. I'll leave at Kansai international airport on 9PM and arriving at Hong Kong airport at 12PM on Friday. It takes about four hours. The time difference between Japan and Hong Kong is about an hour.

I'll share with you a my trip plan.
I'm going to stay the Hostel in Mongkok which is surrounded by entertainment and shops. There are a lot of restaurants and street food stands as well.

[First day]
I plan to take a bus from the airport to Mongkok bus stop arriving at 1AM .I'll be just taking a rest in the Hostel for tomorrow for further enjoyment.

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