Retelling
Retelling.
part1 (the movie"my blueberry nights")
In this part we see one man and one Nice girl.
he is a bartender, she is looking for someone man.
She ask bartender and gave him the description her friend.
He is tall and with dark hair.
The bartender explain he doesn't remember people by they names or by appearance.
He has about a hundred customers a night. He can't keep track of them all.
He says: " I remember people by their orders" (by what they order).
Why don't you Tell me what he likes eat?
- "last time we were here he had a pork chops."
- "o, that because we have the best pork chops in the city!
And he thinks of the guy he came in here for dinner. With a girl.
Nice girl goes out. She is very upset.
After the closing of the restaurant, Nice girl comes back.
They are on the street the bartender along with. The bartender is smoking.
Nice girl : " do you have an extra cigarette?"
B: "sure"
NG: "I only smoke when I get stressed out"
B: well, you shouldn't worry so much.
He wants she will be healthy and avoids problems.
If she doesn't smoke she will be healthy.
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A retelling.
In this first part, we see a man and a nice girl. He is a bartender, and she is looking for someone man. She asks the bartender and gives him a description of her friend, who is tall and with dark hair. The bartender explains that he doesn't remember people by their names or by appearance, as he has about a hundred customers a night. He can't keep track of them all.
He says, "I remember people by their orders" (by what they order. Why don't you tell me what he likes to eat?"
The girl replies, "The last time we were here, he had a pork chops."
"Oh, that's because we have the best pork chops in the city!" says the bartender.
So he remembers the guy who came in here for dinner, with another girl.
The nice girl goes outside. She is very upset. After the restaurant has closed, the nice girl comes back.
We see the bartender, who is smoking, on the street the bartender along with the nice girl.
Nice girl: "Do you have an extra cigarette?"
B: "Sure."
NG: "I only smoke when I get stressed out"
B: "Well, you shouldn't worry so much."
He wants her to be healthy and avoids problems. If she doesn't smoke, she will stay healthy.
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Retelling
Retelling.part1 (the movie"my blueberry nights")
In this part we see one man and one nice girl.
he is a bartender, she is looking for someone man.
She asks bartender and gives him the description of her friend.
"He is tall and with dark hair," she describes her friend.
The bartender explains he doesn't remember people by they names or by appearance.
He has about a hundred customers a night. He can't keep track of them all.
He says: " I remember people by their orders" (by what they order).
Why don't you Tell me what he likes to eat?
- "last time we were here, he had a pork chops."
- "o, that because we have the best pork chops in the city!
And he thinks of the guy he came in here for dinner. With a girl.
Nice girl goes out. She is very upset.
After the closing of the restaurant, Nice girl comes back.
she is in the street along with the bartender. The bartender is smoking.
Nice girl : " do you have an extra cigarette?"
B: "sure"
NG: "I only smoke when I get stressed out"
B: well, you shouldn't worry so much.
He wants she to be healthy and without any problems.
If she doesn't smoke she will be healthy.
Good luck :)
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In this part we see one man and one nice* girl.
He* is a bartender, she is looking for a* man.
She told the* bartender the description her friend.* (?)
He is tall and with dark hair.
The bartender explains that he doesn't remember people by they names nor by appearance.
He has about a hundred customers a night. He can't keep track of them all.
He says: " I remember people by their orders" (by what they order).
Why don't you tell* me what he likes to* eat?
- "last time we were here he had pork chops."*
- "that because we have the best pork chops in the city!
And he thinks of the guy he came in here for dinner. With a girl. (Not quite sure what this sentence means)
Nice girl goes out. She is very upset.
After the closing of the restaurant, Nice girl comes back.
They are on the street with the* bartender. The bartender is smoking.
Nice girl : " do you have an extra cigarette?"
B: "sure"
NG: "I only smoke when I get stressed out"
B: well, you shouldn't worry so much.
He wants she will be healthy and avoids problems. (Not quiet sure what this is supposed to convey either)
If she doesn't smoke she will be healthy. (A better way of putting that would be "she'd be healthier if she didn't smoke"
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