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wait something special I’m going to talk about the time when i waited for the shooting stars. it was last year, actually on October , one day one of my classmates told me that there would be shooting stars in the midnight. So we decided to go to the playground to wait it in the evening. Like i said before we could see shooting stars till the midnight, i guess 1 or 2 o'clock. I didn’t know the exact time it happen, so we bought some drinks and refreshments to kill time. Besides we brought our camera to catch the moment. That day, we laid on the playground and lots of people also waited there,but after several hours later nothing happened, some people run out of patience and went home. But i still waited there. Finally we saw many bright green shooting stars crossing the sky which was an unforgettable night. How i felt about it, well, for starters, never had i seen such gorgeous scenery i will never forget it. Also, if i didn’t wait for the final minutes, i would never see this shooting stars. And i will always keep patient.

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wait something special

I’m going to talk about the time when i waited for the shooting stars.

it was last year, actually on October , one day one of my classmates told me that there would be shooting stars in the midnight. So we decided to go to the playground to wait it in the evening.

Like i said before we could see shooting stars till the midnight, i guess 1 or 2 o'clock. I didn’t know the exact time it happen, so we bought some drinks and refreshments to kill time. Besides we brought our camera to catch the moment. That day, we laid on the playground and lots of people also waited there,but after several hours later nothing happened, some people run out of patience and went home. But i still waited there. Finally we saw many bright green shooting stars crossing the sky which was an unforgettable night.

How i felt about it, well, for starters, never had i seen such gorgeous scenery i will never forget it.
Also, if i didn’t wait for the final minutes, i would never see this shooting stars. And i will always keep patient.

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