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It's almost done! I will discuss my final thesis at the university on Tuesday the 11th of July. Finally!!! I have to admit that i'm kinda nervous about it! I know that everything is going to be ok, I worked really hard to achieve this goal, but I'm feeling a little anxious anyway. From Tuesday onward everything is going to change and i'm super excited!! But i have stay focused for 2 more days, after that I'll finally concentrate on planning my working holiday experience in Australia. Can't wait!!

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It is  almost done!

I will discuss am presenting my final thesis at the university on Tuesday the 11th of July. Finally!!!
I have to admit that i'm kinda I am kind of (OR  ' I am a little') nervous about it!
I know that everything is going to be ok.  I worked really hard to achieve this goal, but I'm feeling a little anxious anyway.  From Tuesday onward everything is going to change, and i'm I am super excited, but I have to stay focused for 2 more days.  After that I will finally be able to concentrate on planning my working holiday experience in Australia.
Can't wait!!


Overall it is very understandable.  However, some very important comments.  'I' is always capitalized.  "kinda" is NOT a veb or a word.  You are writing a lot of run-on sentences.  You need to use periods  I highlighted in yellow where that was occurring.    When we write, we typically omit the contractions, e.g., I'm.  I would write that way iin casual emails/texts to my friends.    

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