2-100 Traffic Condition in My City
Yesterday I talked with my teacher about phobias. I am not scared of traveling by plane, looking down from a skyscraper, small spaces or crowded places.
Besides insect, bugs and worms, you know what makes me feel being afraid of? When someone gives me a drive, and he doesn't wear a seat belt.
It is common in my city that drivers don't fasten the seat belt. Most of them say the seat belt makes them uncomfortable and it doesn't matter if they don't wear it.
You know that for some prime cars, if don't buckle up while you are driving, there will be an alarm warning you. For some car owners, they just ignore it. But for other seat-belt-haters, they are alarm haters, too. Consequently, a kind of fake seat belt buckles is produced. You just insert it to the groove, and the car system deems you have already buckled up, and the alarm stops at once.
Previously, we don't have a law to force all the drivers to buckle up. But about 2 years earlier, the regulation was established. Drivers who don't obey the law will be fined. That is a good sign. It has made citizens realize the importance of wearing the seat belt.
Some other traffic problems are still existing. But I think the traffic condition will be improved in the short future.
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2-100 Traffic Driving conditions in My City
Yesterday I talked* with my teacher about phobias. I am not scared of traveling** by plane, looking down from a skyscraper, small spaces or crowded places.Besides insect, bugs and worms, do you know what makes me feel being afraid of? When someone gives drives me a drive, and he doesn't wear a seat belt.
It is common in my city that drivers don't fasten their seat belt. Most of them say that the seat belt makes them uncomfortable and it doesn't matter if they don't wear it.
You know that for some prime*** cars, if you don't buckle up while you are driving, there will be an alarm warning you. For some car owners, they just ignore it. But for other seat-belt-haters, they are alarm haters, too. Consequently, a kind of fake seat belt buckles is has been produced. You just insert it to the groove, and the car system deems you have already buckled up, and the alarm stops at once.
Previously Before, we don't didn't have a law to force all the drivers to buckle up. But about 2 years ago earlier, the regulation was established****. Drivers who don't obey the law will be fined. That is a good thing sign. It has made citizens realize** the importance of wearing the a seat belt.
Some Other traffic driving problems are still existing. B, but I think they traffic condition will be improved in the short near future.
*"I spoke with my teacher" would sound better, but "talked with" still makes sense
** British people (like me) spell it travelling with two Ls and realise with an "s"
*** I am not sure what you mean by "prime", do you mean "new"?
**** "introduced" is a better word than "established" in this context
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