My daily life
Hello! My name is Zhong Jin.I was bron in2004. I am twelves years old. I am a good student. I am from China,in Guangzhou.Guangzhou is a big city.There are many flowers and trees in the street.And the Guangzhou people is very friendly! On Monday,Tuesday,Wednesday,Thurday and Friday,I usually go to school.On Saturdays, I usually have a music lesson. On Sunday, I usually go shopping with my mother and do myhomeworks!
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My daily life
Hello! My name is Zhong Jin. I was born in 2004. I am twelve years old. I am a good student. I am from Guangzhou, China. Guangzhou is a big city. There are many flowers and trees in the street. And the Guangzhou people are very friendly! On Monday, Tuesday, Wednesday, Thurday and Friday, I usually go to school. On Saturdays, I usually have a music lesson. On Sunday, I usually go shopping with my mother and do my homework!
Zhong Jin, I'm very impressed. You had very few mistakes and I easily understood what you were trying to say. Keep up the good work!
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My daily life
Hello! My name is Zhong Jin. I was born in 2004. I am twelves years old. I am a good student. I am from China,in Guangzhou. Guangzhou is a big city.There are many (it's better to use "a lot of" here) flowers and trees in the street and the Guangzhou people are very friendly! On Monday,Tuesday,Wednesday,Thurday and Friday => weekdays I usually go to school. On Saturdays, I usually have a music lesson. On Sunday, I usually go shopping with my mother and do my homeworks!你的英文非常好!加油!
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My daily life
Hello! My name is Zhong Jin.I was born in 2004. I am twelve years old. I am a good student. I am from Guangzhou in China(or Guangzhou,China).Guangzhou is a big city.There are many flowers and trees in the street and the Guangzhou people's are very friendly! On Monday to Friday I usually go to school. Every Saturday I have a music lesson. On Sundays I usually go to shopping with my mother and do my homework.Want to progress faster?
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