My PC is now really working well I made some entries about my PC trouble and in the last one I wrote it was working well somehow. Although the next day, the trouble began happening again. It has broke

My PC is now really working well

I made some entries about my PC trouble yesterday and in the last one I wrote it was working well somehow.
Although the next day, the trouble began happening/it started acting up* 1 again.
It has broken many times since I built it. I repaired it every time it broke.
I was sick of repairing and thought about buying a new one.

I suppose I was upset a bit at the time so I couldn't cope deal *2 with it properly.
There would could still be something I could do before I decided to buy a new PC.

However the trouble came to happen again and this time this time when it started acting up *1, I could keep calm and thought that I would try to figure out what was causing this trouble/the issue *3.
Then finally I found it.
The source of the trouble problem *4 was the temperature rise of the CPU as CPU's temperature getting higher than *5 I expected once.
I set some values relating to the CPU a bit lower in the BIOS screen then the trouble stopped happening *6.
Maybe what I shall should *7 do next is to get a better CPU cooler. Of course it is much cheaper than (buying) *8 a whole (new) *8 PC.
In addition to that, I think it is not necessary to change the CPU cooler since it is now working very well.
I am happy that I could save (some) *8 money.

* 1 Saying that "trouble [is/was] happening" is not incorrect but it sounds unnatural. A more natural phrase in this case would be "it started acting up." "Acting up" refers to something not performing as well as it could be, or that is malfunctioning.
* 2 "Cope" isn't wrong but cope is a bit of a strong word that we mainly use for getting over setbacks like losing a job, a divorce, the death of a family member or pet, and so on. "Deal with" means the same thing but is less intense in meaning. You can of course still say "cope" if this is what you meant and your computer having problems is an important matter to you.
* 3 In this case "the issue" or "the problem" are more suitable. You can say "what was causing it to act up" here as well though.
* 4 Same as above.
* 5 The wording was pretty strange here so I moved some words around and tried to correct it into what I believe what you meant while preserving as much of the original sentence as I could.
* 6 Again, "trouble happening" isn't wrong but it sounds unnatural. Here it sounds slightly more natural than in other instances though. You could say "it started working again" (focusing on the positive) or "it stopped malfunctioning" (slightly negative, but that's not necessarily bad) to sound more natural though.
* 7 Since you started the sentence by saying "maybe" it means you are not entirely certain, so "shall" should be "should." Shall = "I WILL do this", should = "it would be best if I did this, but I might not (e.g. maybe you don't need to.)"
* 8 All these words are optional but "buying" and "new" makes it more clear what you're talking about (it's not hard to guess, but with the extra words in place there's no need to guess) and the final "some" just sounds more natural. In English we use "some" a lot when we're describing an unspecified (as in not relevant to the conversation) amount.

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