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I wish I rode a bike and looked around. I arrived at a open filed. No others. The wind rose. The sun on the way home. All the bad feelings gone. I wish I could fly, like birds; float, like clouds.

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I wish

I rode a bike and looked around.
I arrived at a an open filed field. (要是名词是AEIOU开头, "a" 就要改成 "an") (field 拼错了)
No others.

The wind rose.
The sun on the way home. (这一句不完整)
All the bad feelings gone.
I wish I could fly like birds; float like clouds. (这里把多余的逗号删掉了)

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