I wish
I rode a bike and looked around.
I arrived at a open filed.
No others.
The wind rose.
The sun on the way home.
All the bad feelings gone.
I wish I could fly, like birds; float, like clouds.
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I wish
I rode a bike and looked around.I arrived at a an open filed field. (要是名词是AEIOU开头, "a" 就要改成 "an") (field 拼错了)
No others.
The wind rose.
The sun on the way home. (这一句不完整)
All the bad feelings gone.
I wish I could fly like birds; float like clouds. (这里把多余的逗号删掉了)
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