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Hello, everyone. My name is Lu Rui. I'm a girl from China, which is a beautiful country locate in the east of Asia. I'm 15 years old, a senior high school student. I live in Chengdu in SiChuang province in China, people sometimes call it "the land of abundance".I like playing the piano, but can't play very well. My favorite color is purple, I think it's a color of dreams. I like eat ice-cream in summer because it is refreshing and cools me down.
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Self introduction.
Hallo, everyone. My name is Lu Rui. I'm a girl who come from China, which is a beautiful country locate in the Far East/east of Asia. Now I'm 15 years old, is a senior high school student. I live in Chengdu, which people also call it "the land of abundance". I like playing the piano though which I (can) play very well*. My favorite color is purple, I think it's a dream color. I like to eat/eating ice-cream in summer because it give makes me cool, lets me feel well.There are This is some information of about me.
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* which I (can) play very well or do you mean 'though I can not play very well' ? - 'though' [ 虽 , 虽然 ] is like 'however' and 'but' [ 但 ] - it is used to qualify or restrict a previous statement 它用于限定或限制先前的语句 [ 请原谅我的中文错误 ]
e.g. I am learning English, though I am not yet good at speaking. 我正在学习英语，虽然我还不擅长说话。
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Self Introduction.
Hello, everyone. My name is Lu Rui, I'm a girl who come from China which is a beautiful country locate in the east of Asia. I'm 15 this year, and a senior student in high school. I live in Chengdu, in SiChuan province in China.People sometimes call it "the land of abundance". I like playing the piano, but I can't play very well. My favourite colour is purple, I think it's the colour of dreams. I like eating ice-cream in summer because it's refreshing and cools me down.This is some information about me.
Hope all of you can help me to modify this article, thanks.
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