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Pollution As a humans, in theory, we are able to understand more than the animals, we take for granted that our intelligence is higher than the intelligence of anothers animal species, but the reality is that we are the only specie who is destroying his own habitat; the biodiversity, the forest, the deserts, the occeans, the jungles... everything , even our health, is being affected because we aren't respecting nature's balance. It's very important, for the planet, as well our own survival and life quality, that we are able to be aware about the need to take care of the earth. In order t start, the most important is to be informed about the pollution problems and climate change. Basically, it is the reason and the consequence of our actions on nature.to Read about things like ( greenhouse effects, acid rain, global warming, emissions, deforestation...) Could teach us the importance about all this situation and to guide us about the solutions. Afterward it's very important to know what we can do to help in our day to day in order to improve the situation( Recycle, reuse ,reduce..) and even we could to raise awareness of more people, either with our example or joining some environmental organization. save the planet it's a responsibility of everyone, and start to take our part of responsibility could be the first step to a global improvement .

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Pollution

As a humans, in theory, we are able to understand more than the animals, we take for granted that our intelligence is higher than the intelligence of anothers  (only needs an 's' when it's about ownership - another's) animal species, but the reality is that we are the only species (species is both plural and singular in english,) who is destroying his own habitat who are destroying our own habitat (because it's 'we' we have to use the 4th person - we are, our, us etc); the biodiversity, the forest, the deserts, the occeans (one 'c'), the jungles... everything , even our health, is being affected because we aren't respecting nature's balance.

It's very important, for the planet, as well our own survival and life quality, that we are able to be aware about the need to take care of the earth.

In order to start, the most important thing is to be informed about the pollution problems and climate change. Basically, it is the reason and the consequence of our actions on nature. to Read  To read, I feel like this is just s typing error, but if you need to have it handed in, worth pointing out) about things like ( greenhouse effects, acid rain, global warming, emissions, deforestation...) Could teach us the importance about all this situation and to guide us about the solutions.

Afterward it's very important to know what we can do to help in our day to day lives (here day to day works, but sounds disjointed, adding that it is our day to day lives rounds the phrase off more neatly) in order to improve the situation( Recycle, reuse ,reduce..) and even what we could do to raise the awareness of more people, either with our example or by joining some environmental organization.

save the planet, it's a the responsibility of everyone, and to start to take our part of the responsibility could be the first step to a global improvement . 

any questions, please feel free to ask :)

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