A heavy rain Today, a heavy rain in our city, It's the biggest rain in recent time. It took away the hot heat and brought cool and refreshing. The feel is so cool. I like the rain in summer. I don't l

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A heavy rain Today, a heavy rain in our city, It's the biggest rain in recent time. It took away the hot heat and brought cool and refreshing. The feel is so cool. I like the rain in summer. I don't like the hot weather, so I need the air conditioner for the hot weather.

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A heavy rain

Today, a heavy rain hit in our city (OR = heavy rain fell on our city), It's the biggest rainfall in recent time. It took away the hot heat and brought cool and refreshing wind*. The It feels is so cool. I like the rain in summer. I don't like the hot weather, so I need the air conditioner (optional - for the hot weather).

Comments:

"...hot heat and brought cool and refreshing _____" --> Because 'refreshing' is an adjective, in this sentence, it needs a noun. Since an adjective describes something. To an English speaker, when we listen to this sentence, we will be expecting a noun, because the sentence does not sound like it is complete.

I hope this helps, Great Job!

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