JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON JUL.5nd(writing about bananas) I would like someone to correct my diary entry (or to tell me the natural way of saying some thing below. But I will be glad to JUST CORRECT my ent

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JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON JUL.5nd(writing about bananas) I would like someone to correct my diary entry (or to tell me the natural way of saying some thing below. But I will be glad to JUST CORRECT my entry) I was wondering if you could do that for me, please? JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON JUL.5nd These days, I eat a banana every morning to keep to be healthy body. Actually, I am in the job which have to move so hard that I feel really tired when I get back home from my office. So, which is why, I guess, someday, I might get sick as much as I should take a break from the work. I think the most important, I mean more than anything in my life is keeping to be healthy body since, beside I have to go to my office to meet every work hour, and I want to enjoy something from bottom of the heart when I am off the work. That's why, anyway, I eat banana everyday. It's because, you know, I hear that bananas, apples or whatever fluits have plenty of nutrition, especially bananas have the nutrition which make you prevent from heatstroke. To be honest, I got heat stroke because of high humidity the day before yesterday. I was confident in my tolerance for heatstroke, but I got that. For these reason, first; I want to keep to be healthy body, second; I don't want to be heatstroke anymore, I have been trying to eat bananas.

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( Continuing from before~ Sorry I couldn't do this another way. )

To be honest, I got heat stroke because of due to high humidity the day before yesterday. I was confident in my tolerance for heatstroke, but I got that. still suffered from it. For these following reasons, I have been trying to eat bananas. Firstly; I want to keep to maintain a healthy body, and secondly; I don't want to be heatstroke anymore again. , I have been trying to eat bananas.

These days, I eat a banana every morning to stay healthy. (OR These days, I eat a banana every morning to keep a slim body). Actually, I have a job which requires hard movement. I feel really tired when I get back home from my office. Therefore, I might get sick and I should take a break from work. I think the most important thing, more than anything in my life, is staying in shape. I have to go to my office every day (Sometimes we say "24/7" (24 hours and 7 days a week). It is an expression to say that you work a lot). I want to enjoy something from the bottom of my heart when I am not at work. That is why, anyway, I eat a banana everyday. It is because I hear that bananas, apples, and other fruits, have plenty of nutrition. Bananas have vitamins which make you prevent from heatstroke. To be honest, I got heat stroke because of high humidity the day before yesterday. I was confident in my tolerance for heat stroke, but then I got one. For this reason, I want to keep a healthy body ( I want to stay in shape). Secondly, I don't want to get a heat stroke again.

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These days, I eat a banana every morning to keep maintain to be a healthy body. Actually, I am in the In my job which I have to move work so hard that I feel really tired when I get back home from my office. So, Which is why I guess, someday, I might get sick as much as. I should take a break from the work. I think the most important, I mean more than any thing in my life is keeping to be maintaining a healthy body. since, beside I have to go to my office to meet every work hour, and I want to enjoy something from bottom of the my heart when I am off the work have my break. That's why, anyway, I eat banana everyday. It's because, you know, I hear that bananas, apples or whatever and fluits fruits have plenty of nutrition. especially Bananas have the nutrition which make you may prevent from heatstroke.

( I'll correct the rest in a moment. I went over the character limit. Hope this helps^^ )

JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON JUL.5nd(writing about bananas)

I would like someone to correct my diary entry (or to tell me the natural way of saying some thing below. But I will be glad to JUST CORRECT my entry) I was wondering if you could do that for me, please?

JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON JUL.5nd

These days, I eat a banana every morning to keep to be healthy body. Actually, I am in the job which have to move so hard that I feel really tired when I get back home from my office. So, which is why, I guess, someday, I might get sick as much as I should take a break from the work. I think the most important, I mean more than anything in my life is keeping to be healthy body since, beside I have to go to my office to meet every work hour, and I want to enjoy something from the bottom of the heart when I am off the work. That's why, anyway, I eat banana everyday. It's because, you know, I hear that bananas, apples or whatever fruits have plenty of nutrition, especially bananas have the nutrition which make you prevent from heatstroke. To be honest, I got heat stroke because of high humidity the day before yesterday. I was confident in my tolerance for heatstroke, but I got that. For these reason, first; I want to keep to be healthy body, second; I don't want to be heatstroke anymore, I have been trying to eat bananas.

These days, I eat a banana every morning to stay healthy. Actually, in my job I have to work so hard that I feel really tired when I get back home from my offce. Which is why, I might get sick I should take a break from work. I think the most important thing, more than anything in my life, is staying in shape. I have to go to my office 24/7, and I want to enjoy something from bottom of my heart when I have my break. That's why, anyway, I eat a banana everyday. It's because I hear that bananas, apples, and other fruits, have plenty of nutrition. Bananas have vitamins which make you prevent from heatstroke. To be honest, I got heat stroke because of high humigity the day before yesterday. O was confient imy tolerance for heatstroke, but still suffered from it. For the following reasons, I have been tryng to eat bananas. Firstly; I want to maintain hearthy body, and secondly; I don't want heat stroke again.

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