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I would apperciate corrections ;) It is undeniably true that the Internet and new technologies have become a crucial phenomenon in current society. Cutting-edge technologies can facilitate our life from different angles, working remotely from home is one of them, therefore, is hotly debated from companies nowadays due to the controversy created between them and their employees. I have a middle position in this debate and subsequently, I would argue that benefits and drawbacks should be consider. Firstly, it is important for companies to create a comfortable and friendly atmosphere at work, a kind of sense of community. Employees need to experience these feelings by sharing with their colleagues a variety of issues related to work, and this is really difficult without any interaction if all of them are working from home. This was the case of one of my fried, who simply quit his job due to the lonely feeling when most of their colleagues worked remotely. Secondly, I consider beneficial the option of working from home as an exception, for instance, when is needed for any kind of mandatory duty, such as doctor appointments. Happiness at the work place is crucial for keeping effectiveness in workers, and companies could provide easily this feeling by offering them the option of working remotely if necessary. To illustrate, recent surveys from jobs seeking websites depict that this flexibility from companies is highly valuable for people, in detriment of others such as social benefits or even better salaries. In conclusion, I argued different relevant points regarding to this issue, in consequence, for the reasons I mentioned before, I think that working from home should be offered by companies as an option but not as a general rule.

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I would apperciate corrections ;)

It is undeniably true that the Internet and new technologies have become a crucial phenomenon in current society. Cutting-edge technologies can facilitate our life from different angles, working remotely from home is one of them, therefore, is hotly debated from companies nowadays due to the controversy created between them and their employees. I have a middle position I am neutral in this debate and subsequently, I would argue that both the benefits and drawbacks should be considered.

Firstly, it is important for companies to create a comfortable and friendly atmosphere at work, a kind of sense of community. Employees need to experience these feelings by sharing with their colleagues a variety of issues related to work, and this is really difficult without any interaction if all of them are working from home. This was the case of one of my friends, who simply quit his job due to the lonely feeling when most of their his/her (unless this is intentional as they are non binary?)  colleagues worked remotely.

Secondly, I consider beneficial the option of working from home as an exception, I would consider working from home beneficial in particular circumstances, for instance, when it is needed for any kind of mandatory duty, such as doctor's appointments. Happiness at in the work place is crucial for keeping effectiveness in workers, workers productive and companies could provide easily easily provide this feeling by offering them the option of working remotely if necessary. To illustrate, recent surveys from jobs seeking websites depict that this flexibility from companies is highly valuable for people, in even to the detriment of other workplace perks such as social benefits or even better salaries.

In conclusion, I argued I have argued different relevant points regarding to this issue, in consequence, and for the reasons I mentioned before previously, I think believe that working from home should be offered by companies as an option but not as a general rule. 

**This is very well written overall! I would perhaps mention at the end the reason why you believe that the argument for working from home trumps the opposing argument. You have given both arguments but should maybe say something along the lines of, "I believe that working from home should be offered by companies as an option but not as a general rule as this would improve job satisfaction by providing flexibility whilst not completely disrupting the workplace environment." This just rounds it off a bit better :) Sorry if I've missed anything.

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