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Global Warming Nowadays the big problem in the World is the Climate change..... The temperature is soaring each year, and the people are surffering mainly in Africa... There are some ways that contibute, the first is water vapor, second is fossil fuels, third is disposal of waste . The companies are burning fossil fuels to increase the production or make energy to supply people with their needs. the gas from this source traps the heat of the sun and give back to earth this heat consequentely the temperature increase and affect the water vapor that become more and more by the evaporation when the liquid turn in gas. Thanks for reading.

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Global Warming

Nowadays the big problem in the World is the (no article needed) Climate change..... The temperature is soaring increasing (soar is used for e.g. birds, planes etc.) each year, and the people are surffering sufering mainly in Africa... There are some ways factors/causes that contibute to it/to climate change,: the first one  is water vapor,  the second one is fossil fuels, and the third one (you could leave "one" out, but it sounds better) is disposal of waste . waste disposal..
The companies are burning fossil fuels to increase the production or to make energy to supply people with their needs. the gas from this source traps the heat of the sun and gives it back to the Earth this heat. Consequentely the temperature increases and it affects the water vapor that becomes more and more by the evaporation when the liquid turn in to gas.

Thanks for reading.

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