Normal day in simple present!
Every morning I wake up at 6:00 a.m., eat my beakfast and I go to my English class. One of the thing that I really like about it, i'ts that I'm learning very fast, and in this moment I know how to use the to be verb and a little about simple present.
Tani it's a girl from my class, she´s pretty and her husband is a handsome man too. The both are tall, and the have three childen, Monica, Tim and Nicole. Monica is the older one, she's 13 yeas old, she like play tennis, and wear pink skirts.
Tim is the second one, he's 11 years, he loves video games, his father don´t has a probles with that, but Tina has it, beacuse she thinks that it's a waste of time. The last one, Nicole, is 2 years, she´s just a baby and is so cute.
Today they are buying clothes for Tim in a clothes store, that's a good place, most of all, because it´s cheap and you can find so many thing like: caps, gloves, shoes, pants, scarfs, swimsuits, t-shits, and all you can imagine. Tim needs a new bag for school, he likes superheroes, so he chooses one with a Capitan America´s picture. He wears many blue clothes, (his favorite color) so, Tina buys him a blue shit, and a pair of blue socks.
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Normal day in simple present!
Every morning I wake up at 6:00 a.m., eat my beakfast and I go to my English class. One of the things that I really like about it, i'ts is that I'm learning very fast, and in this moment (or: now) I know how to use the "to be" verb and a little about simple present tense.Tani it's is a girl from my class, she´s pretty and her husband is a handsome man too. The both are tall, and the have three children, Monica, Tim and Nicole. Monica is the older one, she's 13 yeas old, she likes to play tennis, and wear pink skirts.
Tim is the second one, he's 11 years old, he loves video games, his father don´t has doesn't have a problem with that, but Tina has it does because she thinks that it's a waste of time. The last one, Nicole, is 2 years, she´s just a baby and is so cute.
Today they are buying clothes for Tim in a clothes store, that's a good place, most of all, because it´s cheap and you can find so many thing like: caps, gloves, shoes, pants, scarfs, swimsuits, t-shits, and all you can imagine. Tim needs a new bag for school, he likes superheroes, so he chooses one with a Capitan (Captain) America´s picture. He wears many blue clothes, (his favorite color) so, Tina buys him a blue shit, and a pair of blue socks.
Well written with only a few errors.! ¡Bien escrito! Solo un poco de errores y tu sentido está claro
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