Last Saturday
I had a great Saturday! First at all, because that’s the day that I go to my English school, and I love to go there. As I usually do, I got off the first bus and I took the other one which takes me close to the school. While I was on my way (in the second bus) I barely heard a couple of women speaking Nahuatl. It got my attention immediately, and I stood up to change the seat closer to the women.
That’s something that you cannot see very often in the city, and less in a city like San Salvador. They were talking about… well, I had no idea what they were talking about (haha) but they were speaking in a harsh tone. They seem upset or maybe they were worried or scared to be in the city, I don’t know.
I loved to see their typical dresses! I have always had the desire to wearing exactly what they wear, but just for see how I would look on it.
Later on, I got off the bus and went to my school. I was so happy because I had two Saturdays without going to classes. It was very nice to see my classmates and teacher again, and they received me very happy as well. I really love that place!
Although I couldn’t attend a couple of classes, I didn’t feel the necessity to catch up with the class because I have no problems with the grammar contents (The methodology in that school pays more attention to the speaking part). I only lost time to practice my speaking and learn some new vocabulary.
And finally, like a surprise (because I didn’t know) I had an oral test! I got a 75%. I think it was good because I had 60% in the last one, so it means that I’ve improved. I got the same recommendations though… to work on the end sound of the words! (haha, always!) But this time, my teacher recommended to me another technique, and I think it will help me this time. Anyway, I will work on that very hard.
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Last Saturday
I had a great Saturday! First atof all, because that’s the day that I go to my English school, and I love to go there. As I usually do, I got off the first bus and I took the other one which takes me close to the school. While I was on my way (in the second bus) I barely heard a couple of women speaking Nahuatl. It got my attention immediately, and I stood up to change the seat closer to the women.That’s something that you cannot see very often in the city, and less in a city like San Salvador. They were talking about, well, I had no idea what they were talking about, (haha) but they were speaking in a harsh tone. They seemed upset or maybe they were worried or scared to be in the city, I don’t know.
I loved seeing to see their typical dresses! I have always had the desire to wearing exactly what they wear, but just for to see how I would look on in it. ( you could also have said: it would look on me)
Later on, I got off the bus and went to my school. I was so happy because I had two Saturdays I had not gone to class without going to classes. It was very nice to see my classmates and teacher again, and they were happy to see me too. received me very happily as well. I really love it there that place!
Although I couldn’t attend a couple of classes, I didn’t feel the need necessity to catch up with the class because I don't have no any problems with the grammar contents (The methodology in that school pays more attention to the speaking part). I only lost time to practiceing my speaking and learning some new vocabulary.
And finally, like a surprise (because I didn’t know) I had an surprise oral test! I got a 75%. I think it was good because I had 60% in the last one, so it means that I’ve improved. I got the same recommendations though, to work on the end sound of the words! (haha, always!) But this time, my teacher recommended to me another technique, and I think it will help me this time. Anyway, I will work on it that very hard.
Very good work. Some of the corrections I have made are more to help you sound like a native speaker.
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Thank you very much Khayala and Erick.
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Good job Luisa! keep it up. I also live in San Salvador, so I find very interesting that you had the chance to listen to people speaking Nahuatl. I've never had the chance, but I've always been interested in our roots and history.
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you have a few past simple mistakes.Overall,the text is interesting.
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