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memory When I was a child, I always went to journey with my mother`s friends. One of the most memorable for me was journey to "Tarangul" lake. Because I was just seven years. At this age I wanted to know and learn everything. That`s fun:DD We went to rest. It was summer 2006. Me and my mom woke up early approximately at 5 am. At 6 am my mother`s friend took us. We were by car. On the road we were 3 hours or 3 hours 30 minutes. We arrived before noon, and found good place for overnights. There was such beautiful place. We put tents and started to make food. We went swimming after dinner. It was good time. We were sat near the fire in the evening. In the next morning we went to the forest and pick up mushrooms. We had the same active day as yesterday. In the next day we came back at home. Honestly to say I like to spend my time with older people. That is why I into to remember the same stories.

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When I was a child, I always went journeying with my mother`s friends. One of the most memorable for me was a journey to Tarangul Lake. Because I was just seven years old, I wanted to know and learn everything. That`s fun:DD We went to rest.
It was summer, 2006. My mom and I woke up early approximately at 5 am. At 6 am my mother`s friend took us by car. On the road we were 3 hours or 3 hours 30 minutes. We arrived before noon, and found a good place to sleep. It was such a beautiful place. We put up tents and started to make food. We went swimming after dinner. It was a good time. We were sat near the fire in the evening.
The next morning we went to the forest and picked up mushrooms. We had the same active day as the day before. The next day we came back home.
Honest to say, I like to spend my time with older people. That is why I can remember the same stories.

Very well written!

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