About my life. Is it correct?
Since I graduated from high school, my life changes a lot: I've got married, I have 3 pretty daughters, we built a house.
For the past six years my life is very interesting. I met very friendly and good persons and I visited some beautiful places. I have learnet to drive a car.
Very soon I'm going to work as if I can lost my job. I've been a housewife for the last 6 years.
By the end of the next year I'm going to study Spanish and plan to speak with someone.
In ten years, my daughters will have grown up and I can spend more time reading the books, doing crafts and gardening.
Thank you for correction.
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About my life. Is it correct?
Since I graduated from high school, my life has changed a lot: I married, I have 3 pretty daughters, we built a house.For the past six years my life has been very interesting. I met some very friendly and good persons and I visited some beautiful places. I have learnt to drive (a car).
Very soon I'm going to work ((?as if I can lost my job?)). I've been a housewife for the last 6 years.
By the end of next year* I'm going to study Spanish and plan to speak with someone.
In ten years, my daughters will have grown up and I can spend more time reading (books), doing crafts and gardening.
Thank you for your corrections.
(optional words here).
*for example:= November 2018, or, December 2018.
Very well written!
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About my life. Is it correct?
Since I graduated from high school, my life. has changed a lot: I've gotten married, I had. 3 pretty daughters, and we built a house.For the past six years my life has been very interesting. I've met very friendly and good people and I visited some beautiful places. I have learned to drive a car.
Very soon I'm going to work, if I can find a job. I've been a housewife for the last 6 years.
By the end of the next year I'm going to study Spanish and plan to speak with someone.
In ten years, my daughters will have grown up and I can spend more time reading books, doing crafts and gardening.
Thank you for correction.
Very good!
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About my life. Is it correct?
Since I graduated from high school, my life has changed a lot: I've gotten married, I've had 3 pretty daughters, and we've built a house.For the past six years, my life has been very interesting. I've met some very good and friendly people and I've visited some beautiful places. I have learned to drive a car.
Very soon I'm going to work as if I can lost my job. I've been a housewife for the last 6 years.
By the end of the next year I will start to study Spanish, and I plan to speak with someone.
In ten years, my daughters will have grown up, and I can spend more time reading ("the" is unnecessary) books, doing crafts, and gardening.
Thank you for your corrections.
Good job, and good luck with your further studies :)
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