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My dog. When I got married seven years ago. I never couldn't imagine that I'd be living with "a person" so friendly and so lovely like her. I was never unrespect with any kind of animals but when I got married, in fact, I did'nt want to have a dog living at home and more than this, inside home. My girlfriend won her when she was still just a puppy, that was before I met my girl friend and starting dating her, then, from this day on, they started a relationship as mother and doughter. At first, when I got married I had hard times in accepting a dog inside my house cause in my father's house, dogs were not welcome, inside much less. So I wanted my wife left her dog with her mother who lived alone, To resume this long history, I'd like to say that during these seven years we passed together, she conquered my heart and my life. Nowadays, I love her very much just like a father loves his child. I have been learning with her much more than she with me. I do not have children yet but I have already got some experience taking care of 2 years old children because my lovely dog teaches me a little more day by day. That's my first text. I recently started my intermidiate english course. I have no fluency in any language skills yet, but I think I will get there. I think I need to practice my writing skill much more, cause I have never liked writing at all.

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My dog.

When I got married seven years ago.* I never could have imagined that I'd be living with "a person" so friendly and so lovely as her.
I never disrespected any kind of animal but when I married, in fact, I didn't want a pet dog living at home. My girlfriend won her when she was still just a puppy. That was before I met my girlfriend and starting dating her. Then, from this day on, they started a mother and daughter relationship. At first, when I got married I had a hard time accepting a dog inside my house because on my father's property, dogs were unwelcome, especially inside the house. So I wanted my wife to leave the dog with her mother who lived alone. To briefen this long history, I'd like to say that during our seven years together, she conquered my heart and my life. Nowadays, I love her very much just like a father loves his child. I have learnt much more from her than she has from me. I do not have children yet but I have already had some experience of taking care of 2 year old children because my lovely dog teaches me a little more day by day.

*or, when I married... Normally, the word 'got' can be got rid of.

That's my first text. I recently started my intermidiate English course. I have no fluency in any language yet, but I think I will get there. I think I need to practice my writing much more, because I have never liked writing at all.

Very well written!

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