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Many people go to abroad for higher studies. Do advantage outweight the disadvantages. Some people thinks that education in a foreign country is pointful while other believe that there is no point in that. In my opinion that training in other countries is very benefitcial and open new horizen in my mind.I will explain why in bellow by some reasons First off all, studying in abroad assist us to familiar to other culture and civilization.For instance,A friend of mine who studys Computer Science in japan always tell me about Japanie's discipline and they are very hard working Second,take part in in famous college and university provide us a golden opportunity for achieve educational experiences. By working with professors who publish many article in special field help us to learn their research methodology.For example,when I was in a famous university in the US I found out how to write an International journal in Computer science. In conclusion, I strongly believe that going to abroad is much more profitable than studying in my country. My problem in paraphrasing for some words like,study and abroad. I am appreciated.

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Many people go to abroad for higher studies. Do the advantages outweight the disadvantages?

Some people think that education in a foreign country has a point while others believe that it has no point.
In my opinion, training abroad is very beneficial and opens new horizons in one's mind. I will explain my reasons below.

First of all, studying abroad familiarises us to other cultures and civilizations, eg., a friend of mine who studies Computer Science in Japan always tells me about Japan's discipline and that they are very hard working.

Second, to take part in a famous college or university provides us a golden opportunity to get some education.

Working with professors who publish many articles in specialised fields helps us to learn their research methodology. For example, when I was in a famous university in the US I found out how to write for an international journal in computer science.

In conclusion, I strongly believe that going abroad is much more profitable than studying in my country.**

My problem is paraphrasing some words like "study" and "abroad". I appreciate your help.

**or, ... studying in one's own country.

Very well written!

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