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Effects of Technology Nowadays a lot of people has tecnologic devices and these tecnologic devices take their long time. People are using tecnologic device day time. A lot of technologic device make their life easy, earn money, communicate, learn, research, etc. People can reach much information by internet with computers, smart phones. Social network one of the communication area with other people who is far from to us. İnternet cross borders and makes people closer. Some information necessary some informations are really unnecessary. People are sharing some of sensitive topics about racism, religion etc; especially people violence each other, human to animal and environmental. A lot of children are seeing this violance on computer, television. We need to be awake about violence of media and we have to do our responsibility about it like . We can be sensitive about people think, idea and sharing with respect. When we show our respect we will see that people are showing respect.

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Effects of Technology

Nowadays, a lot of people have s technological devices and these devices take consume a lot of their time. People are using their devices all day time. A lot of Technology ic device can make their lives fe easier, helping to earn money, communicate, learn, research, etc. People can reach access much more information by on the internet with computers and smart phones. Social networks/media?  are one of the means of communicating on area with other people who is far away from to us. The internet crosses borders and makes people closer. Some information is necessary and some informations are is really unnecessary. People are sharing information about some of sensitive topics about including racism, religion and  violence each towards other humans, animals and the environmental. A lot of children are seeing this violance on computer and television. We need to be aware ke about of violence of in the media and must be we have to do our responsible on social media.  We can be sensitive about to how other people think, their  ideas and share opinions ing with respect. When we show our respect we will see that other people are will also showing respect.
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Note: it is much more common to simply say 'technology', 'personal technology', or only 'devices' or 'gadgets' instead of technological devices.


Effects of Technology

Nowadays a lot of people have technological devices and these technological devices take up a lot of their time their long time. People are using technological devices during the day time. (not sure what you were trying to say here with 'day time') A lot of technological devices make their life easier easy by helping them earn money, communicate, learn, research, etc. People can reach a lot of much information via the by internet on with computers and smart phones. Social networking is one way of the communicating  area with other people far or near who is far from to us. The internet crosses borders and brings makes people closer. Some information is necessary to share and some information should not be shared informations are really unnecessary. People are communicating sharing about some of sensitive topics such as about racism, religion, and violence, including to etc; especially people violence each other, human to animals, and to the enviroment environmental. A lot of children are seeing this violence online and on television. We need to be aware of  awake about violence  in the of media and we have to  take do our responsibility for about it like . For example, we can be sensitive about what people think, their ideas, and share with respect. When we show our respect for others we will see that people show are showing respect to us in return.

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