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Travel diary 16th of March (Please help me with corrections) At 11am Tina and Daniel had to leave the apartment and go to the car in a parking garage to put their luggage into the car. Then they went back into the city for lunch, because they wanted to eat at a typical Austrian restaurant. One especially suggested place was Pürstner, a tavern that is located in the heart of Vienna and with a quaint and unique flair. They had a delicious meal and tasty Eismarillenknödel. Their next goal was the Wurstelprater, an amusement park and section of the Wiener Prater, which is a large public park. Therefore they had to ride the subway to the Praterstern subway station. First they couldn’t find the Prater, but with some help they found it. It was a huge amusement park, but both still were so stuffed from lunch, so they decided to walk through the park and have a look into the souvenir stores. At the end the couple didn’t end up buying anything and went back to the city again. On their way through the city, they passed a comic store, where Tina bought an Asterix comic. Then they passed a telephone box, where they posed for some pictures. Straight ahead was their next goal, the famous Hundertwasserhaus. It is a residential neighborhood that was built from 1983 to 1985. The house is known for the colorful and extraordinary façade. A nearby annex was also built in this style and inherit many stores that sold souvenirs. Even the basement had a fountain and was built in its own special style. Before leaving the city center, both wanted to taste an Apfelstrudel. Both intended to eat it at a small café, but most of the places ran out of it. So they went to Zanoni and had Apfelstrudel and ice. Totally stuffed Tina and Daniel left the ice cream parlor. Their last goal for today was the Schloss Schönbrunn. It is located outside of the city, which is why they had to ride a long distance with the subway. Then it was a ten minute walk till they reached the imposing castle. It was first built from 1638 to 1643 and had several annexes in its history. They really enjoyed their stay, had a look at the sunset in the gardens and a walk through the park. When they listened to the nature, they could hear the lion’s roar from the nearby zoo. Then they had to return the last time to the parking garage. The couple were in a rush, because they wanted to check in at 8pm. But on their way they had to stop to fill some gas into the car. Thirty minutes later they finally reached Willi’s Bauernhof, their hotel for tonight in Aichau.

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On their way through the city, they passed a comic book store, where Tina bought an Asterix book comic. Then they passed a telephone box booth, where they posed for some pictures. Straight ahead was their next goal, the famous Hundertwasserhaus. It is in a residential neighborhood that was built from 1983 to 1985. The house is known for the colorful and extraordinary façade. A nearby annex was also built in this style and inherit many stores that sold souvenirs many souvenir stores were located in it. Even the basement had a fountain and was built in its own special style.

Before leaving the city center, they both wanted to taste an Apfelstrudel. Both They intended to eat it at a small café, but most of the places them ran had run out of it. So they went to Zanoni and had Apfelstrudel and ice cream. Tina and Daniel left the ice cream parlor totally stuffed. (I moved "totally stuffed" to the end of the sentence).

Their last goal for today the day was the Schloss Schönbrunn. It is located outside of the city, which is why they had to ride a long distance with the subway (or better:  "take the subway a long distance"). Then it was a ten minute walk till they reached the imposing castle. It was first built from 1638 to 1643 and had several annexes added in its history. They really enjoyed their stay, had a look at watched the sunset in the gardens and had a walk through the park. When they listened to the nature, they could hear the lion’s roar from the nearby zoo.

Then they had to return for the last time to the parking garage. The couple were in a rush, because they wanted to check in at 8pm. But on their way they had to stop to fill some gas into the car up ("fill up" = put gas in the car). Thirty minutes later they finally reached Willi’s Bauernhof, their hotel for tonight the night in Aichau.
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Travel diary 16th of March (Please help me with corrections)

At 11am, Tina and Daniel had to leave the apartment and go to the car in a parking garage to put their luggage into the car (or better:  "...and bring their luggage to the car, which was in a parking garage").  Then they went back into the city for lunch, because they wanted to eat at a typical Austrian restaurant. One especially suggested recommended place was Pürstner, a tavern that is located in the heart of Vienna and with a quaint and unique flair. They had a delicious meal and tasty Eismarillenknödel.

Their next goal was the Wurstelprater, an amusement park and section of the Wiener Prater, which is a large public park. Therefore To get there, they had to ride the subway to the Praterstern subway station. First At first, they couldn’t find the Prater, but with some help they found it. It was a huge amusement park, but both still were they were still so stuffed from lunch, so they decided to walk through the park and have a look into at the souvenir stores. At In the end, the couple didn’t end up buying anything and went back to the city again.

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I'm not able to save this all in one piece, so I'll save the rest of it in a second "correction".

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Perfect but there's something grammatically wrong here "but both still were so stuffed from lunch" you can say were still so stuffed

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