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esse to entered to New York film academy My name is Denis. I am 28 years old. I want to enter the NYFA, in order to become an actor in the future. It is my childhood dream! IThe first time i was thinked about it in 5 years! Really!. When I watched the movie with Mathun Chakraborty - "Disco Dancer". As a child, I was constantly playing in the courtyard simulating the shooting of films and serials, while the series I had came out with a clear timetable. It was very important for me to recreate the realism of what is happening. Later I decided that I would be an actor in Los Angeles. Since I had no financial resources to send my parents, I decided to achieve this through talent, I decided to develop my skills in breadth, began to study dancing and rapping. Soon, I won several dance competitions, several mс of battles, I entered the top 120 mс on the largest Russian battle (7800 participants). After that I decided that I needed to earn money to go to LA and pay for my studies: I opened a dance studio, a children's camp, and now I'm applying for the right amount. Thus, my way from a small village in Russia, which was 23 years in length, brought me to you! I really want to study here!

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Essay to enter the New York Film Academy

My name is Denis. I am 28 years old. I want to enter the NYFA, in order to become an actor in the future. It is my childhood dream! The first time I thought about it I was 5 years old, when I watched the movie "Disco Dancer" with Mathun Chakraborty. As a child, I was constantly playing in the courtyard simulating the shooting of films and serials, while the series I had came out with a clear timetable (я не понимаю эту фразу - что вы пытались сказать?). It was very important for me to recreate the realism of what is happening.
Later I decided that I would be an actor in Los Angeles. Since I had no financial resources from my parents, I decided to achieve this through talent. I decided to develop my skills in breadth, and so I began to study dancing and rapping. Soon, I won several dance competitions and MC battles. I placed as one of the top 120 MCs in Russia's largest battle (7800 participants). After that I decided that I needed to earn money to go to LA and pay for my studies: I opened a dance studio, a children's camp, and now I'm applying for the right amount (я не понимаю эту фразу - что вы пытались сказать?). Thus, my journey from a small village in Russia, which was 23 years in length, brought me to you! I really want to study here!
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Application to enter the New York film academy

My name is Denis, I am 28 years old and in order to become an actor, I would like to enter the NYFA. It is my childhood dream!  The first time I had the idea was when I was five years old, watching the movie "Disco Dancer" with Mathun Chakraborty. As a child, I was constantly playing in the courtyard and acting out scenes from films and serials. It was very important for me to recreate the realism of what was happening.

Later, I decided that I wanted to become an actor in Los Angeles. Since I had no financial resources from  my parents, I decided to use my  talent. I decided to develop my skills and began to study dancing and rapping. Soon, I won several dance competitions and MC contests and I was placed in the top 120 MCs in the largest Russian contest (7800 participants). After that I decided that I needed to earn the money to  pay for my studies in LA. I opened a dance studio, a children's camp and finally, I am in a position to apply for a place. My 23 year-long journey from a small village in Russia has brought me to you! I would really like to study here!

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