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About me Hi, this is first my note and I think the note won't be interesting, but yesterday I've read a few notes and I realised that the people are very kind and helpful. I was realy surprised. So now I'm more confident than yesterday. I would like to write about many thoughts and things, but my English isn't perfect, so the first note is about me. I'm Nikolay, I'm 20 and I'm a student of Institute of Information technologes. I live in Stavropol'. It's wonderful city because there are many beautiful places there. But my dream is New York! I so exited about America, I've T-short with American flag and today a few man were unhappy because of the T-short. They was like "you aren't a patriot". Oh, it was nonsense! Now I'm writing the note and thinking can you understand me? Well, thank you for your attention. I hope for your support with the note. Have a good day!

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Hi Nikolay, nice to meet you !  Your writing is perfectly understandable.  There is nobody here that demands  or judges you on your level of perfection ! We are all a work in progress. Let's take it sentence by sentence see what's going on ----


About me

Hi, this is first my note and I think the note won't be interesting, but yesterday I've read a few notes and I realised that the people are very kind and helpful.  All good up to here!


I was realy  really surprised. So now I'm more confident than yesterday.  really has two "l's"



I would like to write about many thoughts and things, but my English isn't perfect, so the first note is about me.

       cool!   My English isn't perfect either and I am a native speaker!!!

I'm Nikolay, I'm 20 and I'm a student of Institute of Information technologes. I live in Stavropol'. It's wonderful city because there are many beautiful places there. But my dream is New York!

      looking good! 

I  so exited about America,   probably just a typo here but  ..."  I   am so excited"


I've T-short with American flag and today a few man were unhappy because of the T-short.

    Let's change I've to "I have" . Its not wrong but is not commonly used in this kind of sentence at least in the US. 

     and today a few [guys/people] were unhappy     this sounds a little better 


They was like "you aren't a patriot". Oh, it was nonsense!

   They were like , "......     were is for more that one person  [ I enjoyed they way you used "like " here before your quote ! Sounded like a real american young guy. They use that way of speaking all the time! The older generation always criticises them :"Like, Like Like .... too much !"]


Now I'm writing the note and thinking can you understand me?

     of course we understand you! :)

Well, thank you for your attention. I hope for your support with the note.
Have a good day!
   Your welcome ! I support you !   haha!  Next time you can write about your beautiful city ! 

***By the way, you mentioned that you love New York and recently I saw a terrific Russian film called "Hipsters" . Have you seen it? One of the characters goes to New York and returns to Russia to talk about his experience. Such a fun movie and  and a fantastic sound track !
  



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