Internship conclusion
Before the internship my knowledge of advertising industry was minimal and when it comes to conducting online advertising, I knew nothing at all. Now that my two months internship is over, I feel like I have really learned a lot. For the first three weeks, I had been familiar with the daily routine, so I can’t say that this internship was challenging and I had to put a lot of hard work. After a few weeks, I started hoping for a wider variety of assignment to keep myself busy and motivated. what’s more, I felt like my work did not matter that much as I expected and I could my potential capability to a better use, but that’s just a matter of my ambitions. As well, my internship enlightened me about finding the job in the future, I discover myself in a deep way and I focus more on my merits. I found myself interested in project planning and I am scrupulous enough to consider details. Therefore, I would love to go in that direction.
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Internship conclusion
Before the internship my knowledge of the advertising industry was minimal, and when it comes came to conducting online advertising, I knew nothing at all. Now that my two months of/month internship is over, I feel like I have really learned a lot. For the first three weeks, I had been was becoming familiar with the daily routine, so I can’t say that this part of the internship was challenging, and but I still had to put in a lot of hard work. After a few weeks, I started hoping/wishing/looking for a wider variety of assignments to keep myself busy and motivated. What’s more, I felt like my work did not matter that as much as I had expected. That I could put my potential capability to a better use, but that’s just a matter of my ambitions/expectations. As well, Still, my internship enlightened me about finding the kind of job I like in the future, and I have discovered in myself in a deep way resources, and I can focus more on my merits. I found myself to be interested in project planning and I am scrupulous enough to consider details carefully. Therefore, I would love to go in that direction.1
Internship conclusion
Before my internship, my knowledge of the advertising industry was minimal. and When it came to conducting online advertising, I knew nothing at all. Now that my two months internship is over, I feel like I have really ["really" is grammatically correct but not good in writing -- it just doesn't add much to the sentence. Consider "truly", or just omit it completely] learned a lot. During the first three weeks, I became familiar with the daily routine, so I can’t say that this internship was challenging or that I had to put a lot of hard work. After a few weeks, I began hoping for a wider variety of assignments to keep myself busy and motivated. What’s more, I felt like my work did not matter as much as I expected and I felt I could've put my potential capability to a better use, (but that’s just a matter of my ambitions [there's nothing grammatically wrong with this fragment but it sounds weird, maybe "but perhaps that's just my ambitions talking"]). However, my internship also enlightened me about finding a job in the future, and I discovered myself in a deep way while focusing more on my merits [this sentence is also a little confusing, might be better to rework]. I found myself interested in project planning as I am meticulous [This is a matter of choice. "Scrupulous" works but it's kind of a rare word, so I thought "meticulous" was better. Others may disagree with me.] enough to pay attention to details. Therefore, I would love to go in that direction.Want to progress faster?
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