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Changes Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. The world seems to be driven by this tug-of-war between those standing for dynamic changes and those loathing it. At the same time both change and routine equally invest in the progress and creativity of every individual and the whole humanity, being the two sides of the medal called life. Conservatives tend to pave their lives by exploring familiar paths and using traditional tools. But sticking to usual course of events does not necessarily mean resisting transformation, while simply implies that one has enough stamina and power to follow its own way. On the other hand, when you lack the pluck to introduce changes in your daily activities, after all you are unlikely to experience the wonder of life. On the contrary, the greatest change enthusiasts are always willing to embrace an original vision and have proved to bring renaissance into their own existence and reform the traditional way of life. But being continuously engaged in the routine of changes they fail to trace this shift. I personally think that life welcomes the both. Whenever you take a step to transform yourself and the life around you, all it takes to succeed is to be ready to do the same things every day and have a daring to drop it when the routine begins to suppress your creative power. Being sensitive to this subtle play seems to me one the greatest challenges in life.

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Changes

Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.
The world seems to be driven by this tug-of-war between those loving dynamic change and those loathing it. At the same time both change and routine equally invest in the progress and creativity of every individual and all humanity, being two sides of the medal called 'life.' 
Conservatives tend to pave their lives by exploring familiar paths and using traditional tools. But* sticking to usual channels need not mean resisting transformation, which simply implies that one has enough endurance to follow its own way. On the other hand,* when you lack the pluck to introduce changes in your daily activities, after all* you are unlikely to experience the wonder of life.
On the contrary*, the greatest change enthusiasts are always willing to embrace an original vision and have proved to bring renaissance into their own existence and reform the traditional way of life. But* being continuously engaged in the routine of changes they fail to trace this shift.
I personally think that life welcomes both. Whenever you take a step to transform yourself and the life around you, all it takes to succeed is to be ready to do the same things every day and have a daring to drop it when the routine begins to suppress your creativity. Being sensitive to this subtle play seems to me one of the greatest challenges in life.

Very well written! Although, perhaps, the contrasting contrasts of contrasts implied in the *s were a little too close together for me and I didn't know if I was facing left or right in the end.

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