Is this translation from translator correct?
Sometimes, love can arouse people’s possessiveness, control and suspicion, and they will also seduce people’s vulnerability, insecurity and so on, so the breakup becomes so frequent.
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Is this translation from translator correct?
Sometimes, love can arouse people’s possessiveness, control and suspicion, and it may also seduce people into vulnerability, insecurity and so on, that is why the breakup becomes so frequent.0
Now, you can try to transform this phrase into a "Not only......but it also..."construction using inversion and everything will seem more advanced.
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Secondly, the pronoun "they" has nothing to do in this equation. Replace it with "it" since you are talking about "love" (which is singular and is not a person).
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Hi, Stella! As far as I am concerned, this translation is neither outstandingly bad nor impeccably correct. Firstly, considering that you wanted to say that people are persuaded or "caused" to feel vulnerability, you should have said that "people are seduced into vulnerability". Otherwise it doesn't really make sense.
I hope that I helped you a little.
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