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please , helping me!!1 I have to write a short paragrap with 80 to 100 words . This is my homework. please, can someone check it for me? I decide to invest in luxury goods fund because i can recover the starting capital and enrich more quickly. The luxurious goods market aims at high-up customers who are always ready to spend a lot of money for perchasing valuable things such as gold , silver and precious stones. In addition, gold and silver prices are always stable and rarely changed because it has a timing value while other products are devalued like electric tools. Therefore, middle-class people who tend to accumulate and invest for profit, apporopriate a relative rate of this market.

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Please , helping help me!!1

I have to write a short paragraph with 80 to 100 words . This is my homework. please, can someone check it for me?

I decided to invest in a luxury goods fund because i can recover the starting capital and enrich become rich more quickly. The luxurious goods market aims at high-up high end customers who are always ready to spend a lot of money for perchasing purchasing valuable things such as gold , silver and precious stones. In addition, gold and silver prices are always stable and rarely changeed because it has a timing time value while other products are devalued like electric tools. Therefore, middle-class people who tend to accumulate and invest for profit, apporopriate appropriate a relative rate of this market.

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