Environment
Today we can see a lot of politicians talking about environment and what measures should be done to preserve the Earth to future generations. The consumption of fossil fuels and reduce our dependency of electricity generated by nuclear powers are commonly accepted as the key milestone to reduce. Last decade a controversial agreement was signed in Paris to reduce carbon footprint in our planet. Clear steps in the good direction.
However, this year the biggest country, USA, has decided to unsuscribe the Paris Agreement which has dire consequences not only in USA but also for all the countris in earth. We are suffering an increase in the temperatures in Spain, and I strongly believe it has a direct consequence with the actions made by human being over last century. How can we stop this situation? How can we oblige other countries to force with the Paris Agreement conclussions?
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Environment
Today we can hear a lot of politicians talking about the environment and what measures should be taken to preserve the Earth for posterity. Less use of fossil fuels and less reliance on nuclear power stations are commonly accepted as key targets. In the last decade a controversial agreement was signed in Paris to reduce our carbon footprint. These are clear steps in the right direction.However, this year the biggest country, USA, has decided to unsubscribe from the Paris Agreement which has dire consequences not only for them but also for everyone else. We are suffering higher temperatures in Spain, and I strongly believe that this is a direct consequence of human actions over the last century. How can we stop this? How can we oblige other countries to concur/comply with the Paris Agreement conclusions?
Very well written!
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Environment
Today we can see a lot of politicians talking about the environment and what measures should be taken done to preserve the Earth for to future generations. The consumption of fossil fuels and reducing reduce our dependency on of electricity generated by nuclear powers are commonly accepted as the key milestones to reduce. In 2015, after years of negotiations, Last decade a controversial agreement was signed in Paris to reduce the carbon footprint on in our planet. These are Clear steps in a the good direction.However, this year the biggest country, USA, has decided to unsubscribe from the Paris Agreement which has dire consequences not only in the USA but also for all the countries on in earth. We are suffering an increase in the temperatures in Spain, and I strongly believe it has a direct consequence with the actions made by human beings over the last century. How can we stop this situation? How can we oblige other countries to remain committed to the Paris Climate Accord? force with the Paris Agreement conclussions?
I took a bit of creative liberty with the sentence starting... "In 2015, after years of negotiations..." I hope you will not be offended :) I thought you may want to consider indicating the actual date of the accord.
Also, in your closing ("...remain committed..."), I re-worded just a bit to offer a suggestion for your consideration.
Bien hecho! (y perdon por nuestro presidente... es muy triste)
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