Letter for a friend
Dear Sam,
How is it going? I am terribly sorry for what I'm about to say, but finally I won't be able to take care of your dog as there's something important I have to do these days and I totally forgot. I have an appointment with my doctor in Madrid because I'm going to get a sight surgery, so I'll be out of town from 10-12 August.
I feel absolutely sad because actually I was looking forward to spend some time with Bonzo. He's an extraordinary dog! I always have a lot of fun with him and he's incredibly obedient.
If only I had known sooner, I would have arranged another day to my meeting, but I'm afraid now it's too late. My eyes are aching more and more everyday and I can hardly use neither glasses nor contact lenses. I hope I'd be able to get another date, but the doctor isn't free until December, and this operation is extremely urgent. I hope you understand.
Anyway, I can talk to my cousin if you like. He loves animals and I'm sure he would be glad to look after Bonzo. Besides, he lives in a big house with a beautiful garden.
Please let me now what you are going to do in the end. I wish you have a good trip.
All the best,
Laura
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Letter for a friend
Dear Sam,How is it going? I am terribly sorry for what I'm about to say, but finally I won't be able to take care of your dog any longer as there's I have something important I have to do those days and I totally forgot. I have an appointment with my doctor in Madrid because I'm going to get a sight eye surgery, so I'll be out of town from 10-12 August.
I feel absolutely sad terrible because actually I was actually looking forward to spending some time with Bonzo. He's an extraordinary dog! I always have a lot of fun with him and he's incredibly obedient.
If only I had known sooner, I would have arranged another day for my appointment to my meeting, but I'm afraid now it's too late. My eyes are aching more and more everyday and I can hardly use neither glasses nor contact lenses. I hope I'd be able to get another date, but the doctor isn't free until December, and this operation is extremely urgent. I hope you understand.
Anyway, I can talk to my cousin if you like. He loves animals and I'm sure he would be glad to look after Bonzo. Besides, he lives in a big house with a beautiful garden.
Please let me know what you are going to do in the end. I wish hope you have a good trip.
All the best,
Laura
Nice work Laura!
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Letter for a friend
Dear Sam,How is it going? I am terribly sorry for what I'm about to say, but I unfortunately won't be able to take care of your dog as there's something important I have to do and I totally forgot. I have an appointment with my doctor in Madrid because I'm going to get eye surgery, and I'll be out of town from August 10th through 12th.
I feel absolutely terrible because I was really looking forward to spending some time with Bonzo. He's an extraordinary dog! I always have a lot of fun with him and he's incredibly obedient.
If only I had known sooner, I would have arranged another day for my surgery/appointment, but I'm afraid now it's too late. My eyes are aching more and more everyday and I can hardly use neither glasses nor contact lenses. I hope I'd be able to get another date, but the doctor isn't free until December, and this operation is extremely urgent. I hope you understand.
Anyway, I can talk to my cousin if you like. He loves animals and I'm sure he would be glad to look after Bonzo. Besides, he lives in a big house with a beautiful garden.
Please let me now what you are going to do in the end. I wish you a good trip.
All the best,
Laura
This was a really great letter that you wrote overall. Most of the edits that I made were just to make the letter flow a little better. Great job!
Sincerely,
Kyle
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