An enjoyable holiday

I had an enjoyable holiday with my family last week, we did mountain climbing , barbecue, and then we went camping at night. there were a lot of monkeys and visible stars , and the fresh air made me completely relax . we just sat on the grass and tasted tea , ate barbecue and chatted with each other. it was a great night I had recently. Before my article ends, I would like to say that I love mountains because there is less pollution in mountain areas, and there is much more pollution in the cities. I hope people who live in cities can reduce pollution and make our environment beautiful.

this is my first time writing my article in English. I hope you can correct my mistakes and hope you like my sharing with you .
thanks for reading.

An enjoyable holiday

I had an enjoyable holiday with my family last week, we had mountain climbing , barbecue, and than we went camping at night. there were a lot of monkeys and visible stars , and fresh air made me completely relax . we just sat on grass and tasted tea , ate barbecue and chatted , it was a great night I had recently. before my article end , I would like to say that I love mountains because there are less pollution in mountain areas, and there are much more pollution in cities , hope people live in cities can reduce pollution and make our environment beautiful.

this is my first time write my article in English , hope you correct my mistakes and hope you like my share with you .
thank for your reading.

An Enjoyable Night in the Mountains

I had an enjoyable night in the mountains with my family last week. We went mountain climbing, had  a barbecue and then we went camping overnight There were a lot of monkeys and we could see the stars. The fresh air was so relaxing for me. We just sat on the grass, drank tea, ate barbecued food and chatted. It was a great night.

Before my article ends I would like to say that I love the mountains because there is less pollution in mountain areas. I hope people living in cities can reduce pollution and make our environment beautiful.

This is the first time that I've written an article in English. I hope you correct my mistakes and hope you like what I've shared with you. Thank you for reading.

This is very good for a first time writing an article and you clearly have a wide range of vocabulary. Your main problem here is with punctuation. It's important to understand that commas are not used in the same way as full stops in English. I hope you find my corrections useful.

If you'd like to practice speaking, I'd be happy to help you with a study plan.  Feel free to look at my teaching profile and send me a message if you think I can help you."