我写的对不对？
上海，我爱你！ 我想念你很大！我许诺你，我一定回来！！！ (Shanghai, i love you! I am missing you so much! I promise, i will come back!!!)
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我写的对不对？
上海，我爱你！ 我想念你很大！我许诺你，我一定回来！！！ (Shanghai, i love you! I am missing you so much! I promise, i will come back!!!)我的说法是这样的希望能帮到你
上海，我爱你！我非常想念你！我向你承诺，我一定会回来的！
the yellow color is the change part and hope that will be helpful
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我写的对不对？
上海，我爱你！ 我想念你很大！我许诺你，我一定回来！！！ (Shanghai, i love you! I am missing you so much! I promise, i will come back!!!)上海，我爱你！我很想念你！我答应你:我一定会回来的！！！
We usually put the degree adverb after the noun。
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我写的对不对？
上海，我爱你！ 我想念你很大！我许诺你，我一定回来！！！ (Shanghai, i love you! I am missing you so much! I promise, i will come back!!!)上海，我爱你！ 我想念你很大！如此地思念你！我许诺你，我一定回来！！！有生之年，必定重见！！！
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我写的对不对？
上海，我爱你！ 我想念你很大！我许诺你，我一定回来！！！ (Shanghai, i love you! I am missing you so much! I promise, i will come back!!!)說話的對象是上海 ： 上海，我愛你，我會非常想念你，我承諾(我答應)你，我一定會回來!
說話的對象不是上海，可能是別人，也可能是自己：我愛上海，非常想念它。我承諾我一定會回去的!
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我写的对不对？
上海，我爱你！ 我想念你很大！我许诺你，我一定回来！！！（我爱上海，现在非常想念它，我承诺我一定会回去的！）
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