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My hometown I live in the northwest of Taiwan und my hometown is called Taichung. I think about 1 year ago it was rated it's the best place to live in Taiwan. The reason is here is not as busy as our capital Taipei. We do have high buildings but it's not like capital that every buildings are too close. Taichung has been growing a lot recently. A lot of young entrepreneur start up their business here. Taichung is a city which mix a lot of culture. On the other side, in my hometown has good student community. Many international school founded their school. That is why that more and more family has been moving here. I live in the outskirts. Although I'm not live in the downtown I still love my hometown. I have lots of open space here. The most important thing that offers a lot opportunity to work. The public transport is also very convenient. On average, you only need to take 30 minutes to work. Most of people commute to work by bus. If I have children, I want to bring them up here. I want them to experience what I've experienced and the enjoyment. Taichung has a lot of attractions- nightclubs, good restaurant, night markets and so on. Our night night markets is rated by tourists if you visit Taichung, you can't miss it.

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My hometown

I live in the northwest of Taiwan and my hometown is called Taichung. I think about 1 year ago it was rated/ ranked  it's  as the best place to live in Taiwan. The reason why is because it isn't as busy here as it is in our capital Taipei. We do have high buildings/ skyscrapers but it's not like in the capital that where every buildings are too close (to each other). Taichung has been growing/ developing a lot recently. A lot of young entrepreneurs start up their businesses here. Taichung is a very diverse/ multicultural city. which mix a lot of culture. On the other side,(What is the first side?) in my hometown has  there is a good student community. Many international schools founded their school.(I don't know what you want to say exactly, maybe: 'Many international schools have set headquarters in Taichung')  That is why that more and more families have been moving here. I live in the outskirts. Although I'm do not live in the downtown Taichung/ the centre of Taichung, I still love it. I have There is lots of open space here. The most important thing that my city offers is a lot of job opportunities to work. The public transport is also very convenient. On average, you only need to take 30 minutes to get to work. (Or: On average, it only takes you 30 minutes to get to work) Most of people commute to work by bus. If I (ever) have children, I want to bring them up here. (Or: raise them here) I want them to experience the enjoyment that I've experienced and the enjoyment. Taichung has a lot of attractions- nightclubs, good restaurants, night markets and so on. Our night night markets is are rated by tourists (as the best/ worst in Taiwan?) if you (ever) visit Taichung, you can't miss it them.
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My Hometown

I live in the northwest of western Taiwan, and und my hometown is called Taichung. I think about 1 a year ago it was rated it's the best place to live in Taiwan. The reason is here it is not as busy as our capital Taipei. We do have high buildings, but it's not like the capital, that every where buildings are too close together. Taichung has been growing a lot recently. A lot of young entrepreneurs have started up their businesses here. Taichung is a city which mix a lot of where many cultures mix. On the other side one hand, in my hometown has a good student community. Many international schools have been founded here their school. That is why that more and more family families have has been moving here. I live in the outskirts. Although I'm I do not live in the downtown, I still love my hometown. I have lots of open space here. The most important thing is that it offers a lot opportunity of opportunities for to work. The public transport is also very convenient. On average, you only need to take 30 minutes to commute to work. Most of people commute to work by bus. If I have children, I want to bring them up here. I want them to experience what the joy I've experienced and the enjoyment. Taichung has a lot of attractions – nightclubs, good restaurants, night markets and so on. Our night night markets is are rated highly by tourists. If you visit Taichung, you can't miss it them.
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My Hometown

I live in the northwest of Taiwan and my hometown is called Taichung. I think about 1 year ago, it was rated to be the best place to live in Taiwan. The reason is it is not as busy as our capital Taipei.

We do have high buildings but it's not like the capital where the buildings are too close together.

Taichung has been growing a lot recently. A lot of young entrepreneurs start up their businesses here. Taichung is a city with a mix of a lot cultures.

On the other side, in my hometown has a good student community. Many international schools founded their school here. That is why that more and more families have been moving here.

I live on (you can say 'in' but 'on' is more correct) the outskirts. Although I do not/don't live in the downtown area, (Or you can just say 'live downtown') I still love my hometown.

I have lots of open space here. The most important thing that it offers is a lot opportunity to work.

The public transport is also very convenient. On average, it will only take you 30 minutes to work.

Most of people commute to work by bus. If I have children, I want to bring them up here. I want them to have the same experience and enjoyment that I've had . Taichung has a lot of attractions: nightclubs, good restaurants, night markets and so on.

Our night night markets are highly rated (they can by rated, but badly as well. It is better if you specify) by tourists. (I would put a full stop here as it reads a little bit strange)  If you visit Taichung, you should not/shouldn't miss them.


Very good! Keep up the good work :)

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