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Fall Colors I can imagine myself in the car middle of the road surrounded by beautiful fall colors. It's a breath-taking view. In 2014, I visited Boston during the fall season and my brother took me for a ride to see the fall colors. We were driving through the bunch of colorful dense forest and everything I look at it was colors. I look at it is was colors. I filled with joy and colors everywhere. We stopped in few places and took a lot of pictures. I still remember what I did on that day. I went under the tree and asked my brother to shake the tree for me and he did. All the leaves from the tree started falling on me.I feel like I am getting a color shower.It's so funny but I enjoyed a lot. And also, we saw a tiny river flowing on the parallel side of the road.We found small tiny stones were there everywhere. Now I am waiting to have the fall season for this year. I hope I can enjoy much more.

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I can remember myself in the car, in the middle of the road, surrounded by beautiful fall colors. It was a breathtaking view. In 2014 I visited Boston and my brother took me for a ride to see the fall colors. We were driving through a dense forest and the only thing I could see were colors. I filled with joy because I was surrounded by them. We stopped at a few places and took a lot of pictures.


I still remember what I did that day: I went under a tree and asked my brother to shake the tree for me and he did. All the leaves started falling on me and I felt like I was taking a color shower. It was so fun, I enjoyed it a lot. We also saw a creek filled with pebbles parallel to the road.


I'm looking forward to the fall this year. I hope I can enjoy it much more than last year's.


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Fall Colors

I can imagine myself in the car in the middle of the road surrounded by beautiful fall colors. It's a breath-taking view. In 2014, I visited Boston during the fall season and my brother took me for a ride to see the fall colors. We were driving through a bunch of colorful dense forest and everything I looked at it was colorful. I look at it is was colors. I was filled with joy to see the colors everywhere. We stopped in a  few places and took a lot of pictures.

I still remember what I did on that day. I stood under a tree and asked my brother to shake the tree for me and he did. All the leaves from the tree started falling on me.I felt like I was getting a color shower.It's so funny but I enjoyed it a lot.

And  also, we saw a tiny river flowing on the  side of the road.We found small tiny stones were there everywhere. Now I am waiting to have the fall season for this year     for fall to arrive again. This year I hope I can enjoy it even more.

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