Childhood fears
Hi! (this is my first entry, I feel the need to improve my writing skills..so here we go!)
A few days ago I was talking with a partner, and we ended up talking about our childhood fears, those ones that when you grow up you realize how easy it was to get scared and sometimes how "silly" we were being afraid of things like shadows, sleep with the light off, clowns (though I still find some of them really scary ) I remembered that my imagination used to go wild whenever we traveled (by car) late in the evening, every time I looked out of the window I focused my view in the silhouettes of those gigantic trees at the side of the road and started to see them come alive and move on their own (The wind blowing and full moon only made it worse hahaha)
I appreciate your help and/or suggestions!
P.d: I'm thinking to do some illustrations about it, it would be really cool and helpul if you want to share with me any childhood fear you remember :D I've upload one of my illustrations just in case you get curious
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Childhood fears
Hi! (this is my first entry, I feel the need to improve my writing skills..so here we go!)A few days ago I was talking with a friend, and we ended up talking about our childhood fears, those irrational fears, growing up. We realized how easy it was to get scared and sometimes how "silly" we were being afraid of things like shadows, sleeping with the light off, clowns, though I still find some of them really scary. I remembered that my imagination used to go wild whenever we traveled by car, late in the evening, every time I looked out of the window I focused my view on the silhouettes of those gigantic trees at the side of the road* and started to see them come alive and move on their own. (The wind blowing and full moon only made it worse hahaha)
I appreciate your help and/or suggestions!
P.S. I'm thinking to do some illustrations about it, and it would be really cool and helpul if you want to share with me any childhood fear you remember :D. I've uploaded one of my illustrations just in case you are curious.
*there is also a nice, similar piece on this in "Great Expectations" by Dickens.
Very well written!
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Childhood fears
Hi! (this is my first entry, I feel the need to improve my writing skills..so here we go!)A few days ago I was talking with a my partner, and we ended up talking about our childhood fears, those ones that we had when we were you growing up. you We realized how easy it was to get scared and sometimes how "silly" we were being afraid of things like shadows, sleeping with the light off and clowns (though I still find some of them really scary ). I remembered that how my imagination used to go would run wild whenever we traveled (by car) late in the evening. Every time I looked out of the window, I would focused my view attention in towards the silhouettes of those the gigantic trees at the side of the road and would started to see them come alive and move on their own (The wind blowing and full moon only made it worse hahaha)
I appreciate your help and/or suggestions!
P.d: I'm thinking to do some illustrations about it, it would be really cool and helpul if you want to share with me any childhood fear you remember :D I've upload one of my illustrations just in case you get curious
Excellent work and also love the illustrations! - they are great :-)
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Childhood fears
Hi! (this is my first entry. I feel the need to improve my writing skills..so here we go!)A few days ago I was talking with a friend and we ended up talking about our childhood fears. You know, the ones that when you grow up you realize how easy it was to get scared and sometimes how "silly" you were being afraid of things like shadows, sleeping with the lights off, and clowns (though I still find some of them really scary ). I remembered that my imagination used to go wild whenever we traveled (by car) late in the evening, every time I looked out the window I focused on the silhouettes of those gigantic trees at the side of the road and started to see them come alive and move on their own (The wind blowing and full moon only made it worse hahaha).
I appreciate your help and/or suggestions!
P.d: I'm thinking to do some illustrations about it, it would be really cool and helpul if you want to share with me any childhood fear you remember :D I've upload one of my illustrations just in case you get curious
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