TOEFL
The text explains four steps of school education in US including elementary, intermediate, secondary and high schools and the numbers of years required in each.
Professor refers to text but explains some problems he sees in this organisation such as difference in preparation for elementary school, difference in how students grow up and difference in individual velocity of learning and best ways to study or review material.
According to the first problem professor notices that some children attend kindergarden to be prepared for the school and some don't. From the latter group some kids are preparing at home and some of them are not. All of this leads to the difference between children with different background.
Second problem professor supported with the fact that depending on gender children become teens with differert age and specific problems. This also causes their behavior and and ability to learn are not the same.
Third professor mentioned that system does not take the individual difference of each student which also plays big role in education, Because each student need his or her time to learn the topic and the way he or she understands the material the best, but at school everybody have to learn with the common system.
There are three problems the Professor states in his lecture.
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TOEFL
The text explains four steps of school education in the US, including elementary, intermediate, secondary and high schools, and the numbers of years required in each.The professor refers to the text but explains some problems he sees in this organisation, such as the differences in preparation for elementary school, difference in how students grow up, and difference in individual velocity of learning. The professor also explains the best ways to study or review material.
According to the first problem the professor notices, that some children attend kindergarten to be prepared for the school and some don't. From the latter group, some kids are preparing at home and some of them are not. All of this leads to the differences between children with different backgrounds.
The second problem that the professor supported was with the fact that depending on gender children become teens with different age and specific problems relating to their gender. This also causes differences in their behavior and ability to learn. are not the same.
The third point that the professor mentioned was that the system does not take the individual difference of each student into consideration. which also This plays a big role in education, because each student needs to take his or her time to learn the topic and in the way he or she understands the material the best. but However, at school everybody have has to learn with the common system.
There are three problems the Professor states in his lecture.
Hi Anna! I enjoyed reading about these problems in education. Very informative! You have few grammatical mistakes. I changed some word ordering and broke up your sentences to help with the flow and make it sound more natural. Nice work!
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