Would you mind correcting my sentences? If you were me, how would you go about describing a photo?

The photo shows a steak dish of a  one pound of the Angus beef stake (1) which is imported from  made in (2) Australia. The restaurant serving this dish is located in Tokyo.

The restaurant's name is The Ikinari Steak (1) . This restaurant is increasing its presence in Japan and venturing overseas concurrently. furthermore over sea. It's The food is of a high quality and low but sold at an affordable price.

I had one a serving during lunch time. Oh my goodness, it was fantastic! Oh my goodness!

When you need to eat a lot of beef. If you are a beef-lover, I Absolutely would highly (3) recommend(4) this these restaurant.

Hi Hiro,

Just some suggestions for you:

(1) I believe you are referring to "steak", which is a dish made from a thick slice of high-quality meat. On the other hand, "stake" is a sum of money one has invested in a company and therefore has a small ownership in that company OR the amount of money used to place a bet in a gambling game. 

(2) A product that is manufactured in a factory is "made". (For example: These delectable treats are made in Japan.) Consumables (such as milk) from live animals (such as cows) are "produced". (For example: The cows produced many batches of fresh milk daily. When something is transported to another country, it is "imported" into that country. (For example: These sleek sports cars are "imported' from Italy.)

Another example: The Mitsubishi Regional Jet is made in Japan and some components are imported from the United States.

(3) I am not saying that "absolutely recommend" is wrong. I tend to be more formal in the way I write, and certain English words naturally collocate. When we recommend something because we truly believe in it, we "highly recommend" it.

(4) As you have written "restaurant", I changed your demonstrative pronoun from its plural form "these" to its singular form "this". However, if you actually want to recommend every restaurant under the name "The Ikinari Steak", then I will change it to "I would highly recommend these restaurants."

Hope this helps.

Cheers, 
Lance

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You did great.  I found only three minor corrections.  I overwrote yours and put it in parenthesis. 

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The restaurant's name is The Ikinari Stake. These restaurant are increasing in Japan furthermore over sea. It's high quality and low price.

The restaurant is called, 'The Ikinari Steak'. These restaurants are expanding in Japan and overseas. They offer high quality for a low price. 

I had one in lunch time. It was fantastic, Oh my goodness!
When you need to eat a lot of beef.
I Absolutely recommend these restaurant.

I had one of these meals for lunch. It was fantastic. Wow!(oh my goodness is maybe more feminine and maybe a little old fashioned)   When you need to eat a whole lot of beef, this is the place that I'll recommend.

i made it sound better but what you wrote was great.