Hello, please help me correct this paragraph
I don’t think that students who get caught cheating on a test or task should be expelled for one reason. Being expelled from the university or school is life changing, this punishment is just too heavy. I think these students should be given a second chance to improve their behaviour. Nevertheless, there are another punishments that could be applied. For example, they can be suspended, get an economic admonition or just get a 0 in the test or task they are cheating on. Also, if this behaviour doesn’t change and the students get caught cheating again, they should be suspended.
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Hello, please help me correct this paragraph
I don’t think that students who get caught cheating on a test or task should be expelled for one reason. Being expelled from the university or school is life changing. This punishment is just too heavy. I think these students should be given a second chance to improve their behavior. (is that a british english spelling?) Nevertheless, there are other punishments that could be applied. For example, they could be suspended, get an academic warning or just get a 0 on the test or task they are cheating on. Also, if this behaviour doesn’t change and the students get caught cheating again, they should be suspended.Very good. You say suspended twice. I would suggest elaborating on the idea of suspension if a student cheats twice. It currently reads as if a student could get suspended as a punishment for cheating the first time. Clarify that.
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