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Introduce myself. I start short writing from today. I write 15 minutes. I'm from Nagoya, Japan. I'm wrestling player. I have played Wrestling for 10 years. And I had played Trombone for 6 years. My dream is play in Olympic and get the gold medal. After retire, I want to go travel around the world and I want to try Farm stay someday. I'll do everything which I want to try. My personality is introvert and shy. But I'm very optimistic and curiously. I want to become more extrovert. Thank you for checking and correcting my writing!

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Kiwa, Nothing to add to Adam's correction. Regarding your wish to travel the world, you should check out this website https://www.workaway.info It has lots of people who are looking for travellers to stay with them for a short time and help with their work or projects. You get free food and board and in return you do some work for them (usually a maximum of 5 hours a day 5 days a week).
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Introduce myself. ->Introduction

I start short writing from today. -> From today, I will start writing 15-minute notebook entries.
I write 15 minutes.

I'm from Nagoya, Japan.
I'm a wrestlering player. I have played Wrestling wrestled for 10 years. A and I haved played Trombone for 6 years.
My dream is to play be in Olympics and get win the gold medal.
After I retire, I want to go travel around the world and eventually try to live on a farm. I want to try Farm stay someday.
I'll do everything which I want to try. I want to try many things.
My personality is introverted and shy. But, I am very optimistic and curiously. I want to become more extroverted. OR I want to become an extrovert. OR I want to be more outgoing.

Thank you for checking and correcting my writing!

It sounds more conversational to say I want to be more outgoing.

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Introduce myself.   -> My Introduction

I start short writing from today. -> I´m going to write short texts from today.
I write 15 minutes. -> I will write for 15 minutes. 

I'm from Nagoya, Japan.
I'm wrestling player. -> wrestler

I have played Wrestling for 10 years.  -> I have been wrestling for 10 years.

And I had played Trombone for 6 years.
My dream is play in Olympic and get the gold medal. -> My dream is to participate in Olympic games and get the gold medal. 
After retire, I want to go travel around the world and I want to try Farm stay someday. - > After my retirement, I want to go travelling around the world and I want to try farming someday.


My personality is introvert and shy. But I'm very optimistic and curiously. -> courious (adjective)


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