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JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON JUN.20th(writing about my sleep time) I would like someone to correct my diary entry (or to tell me the natural way of saying some thing below. But I will be glad to JUST CORRECT my entry) I was wondering if you could do that for me, please? JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON JUN.20th Nowadays I've been trying to take a sleep for six and a half or seven hours. It's because some reasons. One of some reasons; approximately seven hours is said to the most appropriate times to work cheerfly all day and keep to be a good health body. But, for me, it is a little difficult to keep taking a sleep for roughly seven hours because I have something a lot to do within a day, so I've been trying six and half hours in the most days of a month (Sometimes, say, when I was in off work day, I was able to take a sleep for 7 hours) When I talk about this rule to my friends, they often says to me like this "Serously? Is taking a sleep for seven hours enough to work cheerfully everyday for you?" On the other hand they take this for roughly 9 hours or more. To be honest, I understand what they think like this, but I am Okay in the situation like this. What if I felt sleep a little during working, what would I do? Yeah, just in case, during lunch time, I have a nap about 10 minites. There I have it.

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JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON JUN.20th(writing about my sleep time)

I would like someone to correct my diary entry (or to tell me the natural way of saying some thing below. But I will be glad to JUST CORRECT my entry) I was wondering if you could do that for me, please?

JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON JUN.20th

Nowadays I've been trying to take a sleep for six and a half or seven hours. It's of because some reasons. One of some reasons; approximately seven hours is said to the most appropriate times to work cheerfly all day and keep to be a good health body. But, for me, it is a little difficult to keep sleeping  for roughly seven hours because I have something a lot to do within a day, so I've been trying six and half hours in the most days of a month (Sometimes, say, when I was in off work day, I was able to take a sleep for 7 hours) When I talk about this rule to my friends, they often says to me like this "Seriously? Is sleeping  for seven hours enough to work cheerfully everyday for you?" On the other hand they take this for roughly 9 hours or more. To be honest, I understand why they think like this, but I am okay in the situation like this. What if I  slept  a little during working, what would I do? Yeah, just in case, during lunch time, I have a nap about 10 minites. There I have it.
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JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON JUN.20th(writing about my sleep time) Nowadays I've been trying to take a sleep for six and a half or seven hours. It's of because some reasons. One of some reasons; approximately seven hours is said to the most appropriate times to work cheerfly all day and keep to be a good health body. But, for me, it is a little difficult to keep sleeping for roughly seven hours because I have something a lot to do within a day, so I've been trying six and half hours in the most days of a month (Sometimes, say, when I was in off work day, I was able to take a sleep for 7 hours) When I talk about this rule to my friends, they often says to me like this "Seriously? Is sleeping for seven hours enough to work cheerfully everyday for you?" On the other hand they take this for roughly 9 hours or more. To be honest, I understand why they think like this, but I am okay in the situation like this. What if I slept a little during working, what would I do? Yeah, just in case, during lunch time, I have a nap about 10 minites. There I have it.

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