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My dream Dream is a very common topic .So many people have dreams , especially in their childhood . When we get older , some people may forget their dream . Maybe they seem work really hard , they are busying in studying or working . But in my view , they don't have their target . Beacuse they only do the things that other people consider it is good , rather than do the thing they really want to do or to be the people they really want to be . I am glad to say that I still have my own dream . It is not very concrete , such as being a White collar , starting my own company or being a millionaire . What I want to achieve is a kind of great feeling . I can feel comfortable with my life and work , I can be confident to face challenges and solve problems . I can find my life value in the society , I can feel poetry around me .

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My dream

Dream is a very common topic > Our dream in life is a common topic that we talk about.

So many people have dreams , especially in their childhood .> Because most of us have our own dream of what we want to be, especially during our childhood.

 When we get older , some people may forget their dream .> However, when we get older, some of us tend to forget about our dream.

Maybe they seem work really hard , they are busying in studying or working .> Maybe it's  because we are too busy with our work or with our studies.

But in my view , they don't have their target .> In my opinion, many of us have forgotten about our goals in life.

Beacuse they only do the things that other people consider it is good , rather than do the thing they really want to do or to be the people they really want to be . > The reason is that many of us tend to do the things that other people approved of rather than do the those that we really want to do and be the person that we really want to be.


I am glad to say that I still have my own dream .

It is not very concrete , such as being a White collar , starting my own company or being a millionaire . ?? Do you dream of becoming rich or not? Not sure about  what you trying to say.

It is not a big dream,  such as to be a person who would eventually have their own comp[any one day or to be a millionaire . ??

What I want to achieve is a kind of great feeling . > What I want to have  in life is just happiness.

I can feel comfortable with my life and work , I can be confident to face challenges and solve problems . I can find my life value in the society , I can feel poetry ?? X around me .

> I am comfortable with my life and at work, and I am not afraid to face challenges or problems that come my way. I can see my own worth in society and  enjoy everything  life has to offer.


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我去过马来西亚,去度假。我去了吉隆坡还有兰卡威。我的名字是我自己起的,那是一个水果的名字。
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The content is very interesting. 顺便说一下你去过马来西亚吗?我看你的名字是,你自己选吗?
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My dream

Dream is a very common topic .So many people have dreams , especially in their childhood . When we get older , some people may forget their dream . Maybe they seem work really hard , they are busying busy in studying or working . But in my view , they don't have their target . Beacuse they only do the things that other people consider it  is  good , rather than do the thing they really want to do or to be the people they really want to be .
I am glad to say that I still have my own dream . It is not very concrete , such as being a White collar , starting my own company or being a millionaire . What I want to achieve is a kind of great feeling . I can feel comfortable with my life and work , I can be confident to face challenges and solve problems . I can find my life value in the society , I can feel poetry around me .

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