JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON JUN.16th (writing about geeting together in Tokyo station) I would like someone to correct my diary entry (or to tell me the natural way of saying some sentenses below naturally.

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JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON JUN.16th (writing about geeting together in Tokyo station) I would like someone to correct my diary entry (or to tell me the natural way of saying some sentenses below naturally. But I will be glad to JUST CORRECT my entry) I was wondering if you could do that for me, please? JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON JUN.16th I went to Tokyo to see and talk with my friends who had being really close since my school days. The period when was from Jun 9th to 11th. I was looking forward to seeing them again until before getting together in Tokyo station. When we got together each other in Tokyo station right then, actually we didn't exactly have a plan something like where we are going in the day, what kind of fancy foods will we grab or whatever even though I haven't seen ever something to see in Tokyo for tourists much. So your thoughts is here "I am supposed to have something to see like Tower of tokyo or something", isn't it. Year, that idea could be true, but for me, Just seeing and talking with them was almost enough to fill my hurt with satisfying as if w0e had no plan at all. (Oh year, to be honest, telling you the truth, in the next day, we were enjoying sight-seeing in Tokyo.) A few minetus later after then, we were in Starbucks nearby the station to be chill out for now.

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JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON JUN.16th (writing about getting together in Tokyo station)

I would like someone to correct my diary entry (or to tell me the natural way of saying some sentences below naturally. But I will be glad to JUST CORRECT my entry) I was wondering if you could do that for me, please?

JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON JUN.16th

I went to Tokyo to visit my friends, who I have being really close with since my days at school. I was there from June 9th to the 11th. I was looking forward to seeing them again before getting together in Tokyo station. When we got together in Tokyo station, we didn't actually have a plan right then. Like where we are going in the day, what kind of fancy foods we will grab or whatever, even though I haven't seen much of the stuff in Tokyo that is for tourists. So your thoughts might be "I am supposed to have something I want to see like Tower of Tokyo or something", right? Yeah, that idea could be true, but for me, just seeing and talking with them was almost enough to satisfy and fill my heart, even if we had no plan at all. (Oh yeah, to be honest, telling you the truth, in the next day, we enjoyed sight-seeing in Tokyo.) A few minutes later, we were in a Starbucks nearby the station to just chill for awhile.

**I edited the entry, as well as changed some parts to sound more natural, especially if it made it easier to understand. I didn't focus on punctuation too much, since it's a blog entry. Hope this helps!**

JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON JUN.16th (writing about geeting together in Tokyo station) I went to Tokyo to visit my friends, who I have being really close with since my days at school. I was there from June 9th to the 11th. I was looking forward to seeing them again before getting together in Tokyo station. When we got together in Tokyo station, we didn't actually have a plan right then. Like where we are going in the day, what kind of fancy foods we will grab or whatever, even though I haven't seen much of the stuff in Tokyo that is for tourists. So your thoughts might be "I am supposed to have something I want to see like Tower of Tokyo or something", right? Yeah, that idea could be true, but for me, just seeing and talking with them was almost enough to satisfy and fill my heart, even if we had no plan at all. (Oh yeah, to be honest, telling you the truth, in the next day, we enjoyed sight-seeing in Tokyo.) A few minutes later, we were in a Starbucks nearby the station to just chill for a while.

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