Stranger in a strange land
Many people think that traveling is the most important thing in the life, but others don’t agree. But it’s doubtless that people all over the world like going traveling. In this essay I want to deal with you my favourite part about visiting a new places. If my vocation started right now I would think about three things: what kind of food I’d like to taste, what kind of architecture I want to see and what kind of people I’d prefer to meet.
The first thing that needs to be said is my travelling experience. When I was studying at university I used to go to the Crimea. If I had an opportunity to go there every year I would be extremely happy. I’ve visited most of the Crimea towns and villages. If you have been by the Black sea even once you will never forget the time spending there. To my mind sea is a little bit mystery place. Even if you don’t like sunbathe or go swimming you can’t help loving your vocation at the seaside. Moreover you can go fishing or jogging in the morning. It’s worth trying at least once in a lifetime. As far as I’m concerned I like taking pictures very much, especially when I’m on vacation. And certainly you must try Crimea cuisine, it could make a nice change. However, one should accept that some people prefer going to foreign countries but it costs much more expensive. Were you have a summer vacation, you should take your friend and go to a journey.
In conclusion I’d say that all of us really love relaxing. There are a lot of interesting activities you may try. And one of the most exciting is traveling. To sum up I believe that nobody can live without having a rest. Each trip opens for us a new page of our life. So I wish you to have a good time during your nearest journey!
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Stranger in a strange land
Many people think that traveling is the most important thing in the life, but others don’t agree. But it’s doubtless that people all over the world like going traveling. In this essay I want to deal with you my favourite part about visiting a new places. If my vacation started right now I would think about three things: what kind of food I’d like to taste, what kind of architecture I want to see and what kind of people I’d prefer to meet.The first thing that needs to be discussed is my travelling experience. When I was studying at university, I used to go to the Crimea. If I had an opportunity to go there every year I would be extremely happy. I’ve visited most of the towns and villages in Crimea. If you have been by the Black Sea even once you will never forget the time spent there. In my mind the sea is a little bit mysterious . Even if you don’t like to sunbathe or go swimming, you can’t help loving your vacation at the seaside. Moreover, you can go fishing or jogging in the morning. It’s worth trying at least once in a lifetime. As far as I’m concerned, I like taking pictures very much, especially when I’m on vacation. And certainly you must try Crimean cuisine. It could make a nice change. However, one should accept that some people prefer going to foreign countries, but it the cost is much more expensive. When you have a summer vacation, you should take your friend and go on a journey.
In conclusion, I’d say that all of us really love relaxing. There are a lot of interesting activities you may try, and one of the most exciting is traveling. To sum it up, I believe that nobody can live without having a rest. Each trip opens for us a new page of our life. So I hope you to have a good time on your next journey!
Notes: This is really well written and interesting to read. It makes me want to travel! :)
* In formal writing, you usually shouldn't use "but", "and", or "so" to begin a sentence.
* We usually say "*on* a journey".
Examples:
- I will go on a journey to Spain tomorrow.
- I hope you have fun on your journey.
- On my journey to New York, I met a lot of nice people.
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