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JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON JUN.15th(writing about SNS) I would like someone to correct my diary entry (or to tell me the natural way of saying some sentenses below naturally. But I will be glad to JUST CORRECT my entry) Could you do that for me, please? JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON JUN.15th Now, I am thinking somethig following next. With SNS is getting popular and useful, we need to pick only the most necessary information from a bunch of information across the world. When you hear SNS, you would imagine up Facebook, Instagram, Twitter or someghing in your mind, and possibly there is no people who never use it. You see, SNS is getting be a popular tool for people sharply, and really essential tool in our life. Can you imagine that the workd where there was no SNS? If I was there, I coud feel uncomfortable so badly since I have been got a lot of benefit from SNS. but as SNS is getting better to get a lot of information at once, at the same time information that don't need for most of people has come up more and more in SNS. You know, we can say something rubbish so easily on especially Twitter or Facebook, so we find ourselves saying something rubbish there. Of course these statement on Twitter etc can be unecessary for someone, so I am thinking that we want to pick only the most necessary information from a bunch of informaton across the world.

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JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON JUN.15th(writing about SNS)

I would like someone to correct my diary entry (or to tell me the natural way of saying some sentenses below naturally. But I will be glad to JUST CORRECT my entry) Could you do that for me, please?

JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON JUN.15th

Now, I am thinking something about the future (?). With SNS becoming more popular and useful, we need to pick only the most necessary information from a bunch of information across the world. When you hear SNS, you would imagine Facebook, Instagram, Twitter or something similar in your mind, and possibly there is no-one who has never used it. You see, SNS is quickly becoming a popular tool for people, and a really essential tool in our life. Can you imagine that a world where there is no SNS? If I was there, I would feel very uncomfortable since I get a lot of benefit from SNS. But as SNS is becoming more useful for receiving a lot of information at once, at the same time information that most people don't need occurs more and more in SNS. You know, we can say something rubbish so easily, especially on Twitter or Facebook, so we find ourselves saying something rubbish there. Of course these statements on Twitter etc can be unnecessary for someone, so I am thinking that we want to pick only the most necessary information from a bunch of information across the world.

* I had to google SNS, this term is not used much in English. You should say 'social media' instead of SNS when talking about facebook, twitter etc. Interesting entry!*


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JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON JUN.15th(writing about social media) Now, I am thinking something about the future. With social-media becoming more popular and useful, we need to pick only the most necessary information from a bunch of information across the world. When you hear social-media, you would imagine Facebook, Instagram, Twitter or something similar in you mind, and possibly there is no-one who has never used it. You see, social media is quickly becoming a popular tool for people, and a really essential tool in our life. Can you imagine that a world where there is no social-media? If I was there, I would feel very comfortable since I get a lot of benefit from SNS. But as social-media is becoming more useful for receiving a lot of information at once, at the same time information that most people don't need occurs more and more in social-media. You know, we can say something rubbish so easily, especially on Twitter or Facebook, so we find ourselves saying something rubbish there. Of course these statements on Twitter etc can be unnecessary for someone, so I am thinking that we want to pick only the most necessary information from a bunch of information across the world.

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